Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรปรับปรุงเรื่องไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'reading' ควรเป็น 'read' และประโยคควรมีความสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'cheaper cheaper' และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading. It has many books, and borrowing them is cheaper than buying my own.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำกริยาให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'listening music' ควรเป็น 'listen to music' และเพิ่ม linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

例: I usually listen to music while reading novels and magazines in the library.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น 'I can reading' ควรเป็น 'I could read' และ 'in on ebooks' ควรเป็น 'on ebooks' รวมถึงเพิ่ม linking words เพื่อความสมบูรณ์ของประโยค

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I could read books on ebooks at home.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และโครงสร้างประโยค เช่น 'I am Thai people' ควรเป็น 'I am Thai' และ 'Chinese kids were going to library' ควรเป็น 'Chinese kids often go to the library' รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

例: I'm not sure because I'm Thai, not Chinese, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library.

× I often go to library because I like to reading.

✓ I often go to the library because I like reading.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'like to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'like reading' because 'like' is followed by the gerund form of the verb.

× The many books and the libraries books is cheaper cheaper than mine.

✓ Many books and the library's books are cheaper than mine.

'The many books' is incorrect; 'many books' is the correct quantifier without 'the'. Also, 'libraries books' should be possessive as 'library's books'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. The repeated word 'cheaper' is a typo and should appear once.

× I usually do listening music and reading novels and magazines.

✓ I usually listen to music and read novels and magazines.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used here. Instead, use the verbs 'listen to' and 'read' directly. 'Listening music' should be 'listen to music' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.

× No, I didn't go to library because I think I can reading books in on ebooks.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library because I thought I could read books on ebooks.

The verb tense should be consistent in the past: 'think' should be 'thought', 'can' should be 'could', and 'reading' should be 'read'. Also, 'in on ebooks' is incorrect; 'on ebooks' is correct. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× No, I didn't go to library because I think I can reading books in on ebooks.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library because I thought I could read books on ebooks.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese, I am Thai people, so I think maybe Chinese kids were going to library.

✓ I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese; I am Thai, so I think maybe Chinese kids go to the library.

'Thai people' is incorrect here; 'Thai' is the correct adjective or noun to describe nationality. Also, 'were going to library' is incorrect tense and missing the article; it should be 'go to the library'. The sentence is better connected with a semicolon or conjunction.