Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some pronunciation and grammar errors, such as 'live ready' instead of 'library' and 'full enjoy' instead of 'fully enjoy'. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct word forms. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas more smoothly.

例: Yes, I often go to the library about three times a week, usually with my friends. I enjoy reading there because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Moreover, the quiet environment allows me to focus better and fully enjoy my time.

提案: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct verb forms. Be specific about your activities in the library.

例: In the library, I usually read books about geometry or history with my friends. We also study together and complete the homework assigned by our teachers. Additionally, we explore different sections of the library to discover new information.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'go live' instead of 'go to the library' and 'loving, loving reading books'. Use past tense consistently and improve sentence clarity.

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library with my father. He loved reading books, and we would read together. He also helped me with my homework assigned by my teachers.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions like 'Chinese peoples' and 'achieve different knowledge'. Use plural forms correctly and express ideas more naturally. Also, try to explain why going to the library is helpful.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because it helps them learn about various subjects. This exposure to different knowledge can improve their understanding and make them smarter.

× Yes, I often go to live ready, usually about 3 * a week, mostly with my friends.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library, usually about 3 times a week, mostly with my friends.

The phrase 'go to live ready' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct preposition and noun phrase is 'go to the library'. Also, '3 * a week' should be '3 times a week' to express frequency properly.

× Also being in a quiet environment allows me to focus better and full enjoy my time.

✓ Also, being in a quiet environment allows me to focus better and fully enjoy my time.

The adverb 'full' is incorrectly used; the correct adverb form is 'fully' to modify the verb 'enjoy'.

× Uh, I usually do in the library, uh, by readings, uh, geometrical books or historical books with my friends and also gathering with, uh, doing practicing the work given by the school.

✓ Uh, I usually read geometrical or historical books in the library with my friends, and also gather to practice the work given by the school.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Do in the library by readings' is incorrect; it should be 'read books'. 'Doing practicing' is redundant; 'practice' suffices. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh also we are visit all the libraries and search new things.

✓ Uh, also we visit all the libraries and search for new things.

The verb 'visit' should not be preceded by 'are' in this context; simple present tense 'we visit' is correct. Also, 'search new things' requires the preposition 'for' to be grammatically correct: 'search for new things'.

× Yeah, As a child, I usually go live with my father.

✓ Yeah, as a child, I usually went to the library with my father.

The question is about past habits, so past tense 'went' is appropriate instead of present tense 'go'. Also, 'go live' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'.

× He's also a loving, loving reading books.

✓ He also loves reading books.

The phrase 'a loving, loving reading books' is incorrect. 'Loving' is an adjective and cannot be used this way. The correct expression is 'He loves reading books.'

× And we both go to the library and read books as well as he taught me homework given by the teachers.

✓ And we both went to the library and read books, and he also helped me with homework given by the teachers.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the context is past, 'go' should be 'went'. Also, 'he taught me homework' is awkward; 'he helped me with homework' is clearer and more natural.

× Yeah, Chinese peoples go to library because when we go to library we can achieve different knowledge and different topics which will be helpful for them and also make them smart.

✓ Yeah, Chinese people go to the library because when we go to the library we can gain different knowledge and learn about different topics which will be helpful for them and also make them smarter.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. Also, 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Achieve knowledge' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'gain knowledge'. 'Make them smart' should be 'make them smarter' to indicate improvement.