Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Yes, I often go to the library on the weekends and especially when I have free time and I have a lot of work to do. But I want to try a new environment to study or work.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
As regard when I go to the library, I often have a lot of work to do, so especially when I enter the library, I often open my laptop and doing the homework I got or sometimes I'm doing some tasks for my club.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Uh, no, because I didn't have. I don't have any memory about me when I was a kid going to the library. So yeah, that's maybe just.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
This is a kind of hard question for me. Umm, I think yes, I'm not sure about that because I'm Vietnamese, but umm, because we are Asian, we got the culture that we need to study very hard from the very young age. So I think they will they would need to go to the library a lot.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng hơi dài và có phần lặp lại. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ tần suất và lý do đi thư viện, rồi thêm ý định thay đổi môi trường học tập.
例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends because I have a lot of work to do. However, I would like to try studying in a new environment to stay motivated.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, tránh dùng các cụm từ không cần thiết như 'As regard'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'doing' nên là 'do') và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Cố gắng cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm trong thư viện.
例: When I go to the library, I usually open my laptop to do my homework. Sometimes, I also complete tasks for my club there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ ngữ không chắc chắn như 'maybe just'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp thêm lý do hoặc cảm nhận nếu có thể.
例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I don't remember visiting one during my childhood.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên tránh nói những câu như 'This is a kind of hard question for me' trong bài thi. Thay vào đó, hãy trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng dùng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lặp từ như 'will they would'.
例: Although I'm not Chinese, I believe that Chinese children often go to the library because studying hard is an important part of Asian culture from a young age.
文法
× I often open my laptop and doing the homework I got or sometimes I'm doing some tasks for my club.
✓ I often open my laptop and do the homework I have or sometimes I do some tasks for my club.
The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used after 'and' which should be followed by the base form of the verb to maintain parallel structure. Also, 'I'm doing' should be 'I do' to match the habitual action described in the present tense.
× Uh, no, because I didn't have.
✓ Uh, no, because I didn't go.
The phrase 'I didn't have' is incomplete and unclear. The correct past tense verb 'go' should be used to complete the sentence meaningfully in response to the question about going to the library.
× I don't have any memory about me when I was a kid going to the library.
✓ I don't have any memory of going to the library when I was a kid.
The phrase 'memory about me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'memory of'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by placing 'when I was a kid' at the end for clarity.
× So yeah, that's maybe just.
✓ So yeah, maybe that's it.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Reordering the words to 'maybe that's it' forms a complete and meaningful sentence.
× because I didn't have. I don't have any memory about me when I was a kid going to the library.
✓ because I didn't go. I don't have any memory of going to the library when I was a kid.
The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used after 'memory about'. The correct phrase is 'memory of' followed by the gerund form of the verb. Also, 'didn't have' is incomplete and should be 'didn't go' to make sense.
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