Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use the correct tense and article. Instead of 'I'm going', say 'I go' or 'I often go'. Also, say 'on a regular basis' to sound more natural. Keep your answer concise and direct.

例: Yes, I often go to the library on a regular basis.

提案: Use the correct article 'the' before 'library'. Also, try to add a linking phrase to make your answer more coherent, for example, 'because I like to read, I usually spend time reading books there.'

例: I usually read books in the library because I like to read and it is a quiet place to concentrate.

提案: Use the simple past tense 'I went' instead of 'I was going'. Also, include the article 'the' before 'library'.

例: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid.

提案: Use the simple present tense 'Chinese kids often go' instead of 'are often going'. Include the article 'the' before 'library'. Avoid ending with 'and that's it' as it sounds informal and incomplete. Add more specific reasons or examples.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they enjoy reading and it helps them with their studies.

× Yes, I'm going to the library on regular basis.

✓ Yes, I go to the library on a regular basis.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous tense 'I'm going' to describe a habitual action. Habitual actions should be expressed using the simple present tense. Also, the phrase 'on regular basis' is missing the article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'on a regular basis'.

× I am reading books in library because I like to read.

✓ I am reading books in the library because I like to read.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Yes, I was going to library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

The past continuous tense 'was going' is not appropriate here because the action is a habitual past action. The simple past tense 'went' should be used. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, Chinese kids are often going to library because they love to read and that's it.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they love to read.

The phrase 'are often going' is incorrect for habitual actions; the simple present 'often go' is appropriate. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'and that's it' is unnecessary and informal, so it is omitted for clarity and correctness.