Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I do often go"; instead, say "I often go." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add a bit more specific detail about why the library helps you focus.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment where I can concentrate better. For example, when I study there, I find fewer distractions compared to home, which helps me complete my assignments efficiently.

提案: Your answer has some unclear and incorrect phrases, such as "whatever talks I need to do" and "finish all my taxes." Try to use precise vocabulary and avoid confusing expressions. Also, organize your answer logically with linking words and keep it concise.

例: Usually, I find a quiet corner in the library to work on my school assignments. After finishing my work, I pack my things and head straight home. This routine helps me stay focused and productive.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors like "did used to go library." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details about your experience.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I was quite introverted. Therefore, I preferred studying alone in the library rather than joining group study sessions.

提案: Your answer is honest but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using more formal expressions. Also, try to provide a clearer opinion with supporting reasons or examples.

例: Although I was not raised in China, based on what I've seen in videos and social media, it seems that many Chinese kids often visit libraries to study and do their homework.

× Yes, I do often go to the library.

✓ Yes, I often do go to the library.

The adverb 'often' is better placed before the auxiliary verb 'do' for natural English word order. Placing 'often' after 'do' is less common and sounds awkward.

× I really have to work on my school assignments and complete my task.

✓ I really have to work on my school assignments and complete my tasks.

The word 'assignments' is plural, so 'task' should also be plural to maintain consistency and agreement in number.

× I usually like to sit in a corner and then start doing my school assignments or whatever talks I need to do.

✓ I usually like to sit in a corner and then start doing my school assignments or whatever tasks I need to do.

The word 'talks' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'tasks'. 'Talks' refers to speeches or conversations, which does not fit the context.

× I really like to finish all my taxes in the library and pick up my bags and then straight go to my house.

✓ I really like to finish all my tasks in the library and pick up my bags and then go straight to my house.

The word 'taxes' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'tasks' to refer to assignments or work. Also, 'straight go' is unnatural; 'go straight' is the correct adverb placement.

× Yes, I did used to go library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I did use to go to the library when I was a kid.

After 'did', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'used' changes to 'use'. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed before 'the library'.

× Yes, I did used to go library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I did use to go to the library when I was a kid.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.