Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading and studying in a quiet environment.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually go to the library to study and read books because it helps me concentrate, and I find it very relaxing.

提案: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích hoặc cung cấp ví dụ nếu cần.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one near my home.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Vietnam, many children visit the library during summer holidays to read and study.

× No, I often go to the library.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library.

The answer contradicts the question. The question asks if the student often goes to the library, and the student says 'No' but then says 'I often go to the library.' The correction aligns the response logically with the question.

× I sometime library.

✓ I sometimes go to the library.

The word 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, the verb 'go' is missing after 'sometimes.'

× No, I I think I go to library to study and read books.

✓ No, I think I go to the library to study and read books.

There is a repeated pronoun 'I I' which is incorrect. Also, the article 'the' is missing before 'library.'

× I feel relaxing and.

✓ I feel relaxed.

The adjective 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation, but here the student wants to express their own feeling, so 'relaxed' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× No, I don't. What's it like really when I kiss? Because I don't.

✓ No, I didn't. What was it really like when I was a kid? Because I don't remember.

The student uses present tense 'don't' when referring to past events. Also, 'kiss' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'kid.' The question is about past experience, so past tense is required.

× I don't know because I not live in Chinese, I in summer living in Vietnam.

✓ I don't know because I don't live in China; I live in Vietnam during the summer.

'Chinese' is an adjective, the correct noun is 'China.' The sentence lacks auxiliary verbs and proper prepositions. 'In summer living in Vietnam' is awkward and needs restructuring.

× So it's getting Vietnam sometime looks a lot better.

✓ So sometimes Vietnam looks a lot better.

The phrase 'it's getting Vietnam' is incorrect. The intended meaning is that sometimes Vietnam looks better. The sentence needs to be simplified and corrected for tense and word order.