Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and clear. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons why you like the library.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy the quiet atmosphere which helps me concentrate. Also, seeing other people's books inspires me to learn more.

提案: Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'something like that'.

例: Usually, I study in the library because it is quiet and comfortable. Sometimes, I relax by browsing bookshelves and occasionally I search for specific books to help with my studies.

提案: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence and explain your reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

例: I rarely went to the library as a child because I didn't realise it was a quiet place to concentrate. Also, I wasn't aware of how beneficial the atmosphere there could be for studying.

提案: Avoid hesitation and filler words. Structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be specific about reasons and avoid vague expressions.

例: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they spend a lot of time at school and are usually tired afterwards. Therefore, they prefer to study at home or relax instead.

× the books over in the library is just very useful

✓ the books over in the library are just very useful

The subject 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× when I see others book it helps me a lot

✓ when I see others' books it helps me a lot

The possessive form 'others' should be used with plural 'books' to indicate books belonging to others.

× I often study at in the library

✓ I often study in the library

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'in the library' is the correct phrase to indicate location.

× I sometimes go to library for books

✓ I sometimes go to the library for books

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I rarely go to the library when I was a kid

✓ I rarely went to the library when I was a kid

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'went' to match the time frame.

× I didn't notice the library was had a quiet

✓ I didn't notice the library had a quiet

The auxiliary verb 'was' is unnecessary here; 'had' alone correctly expresses possession in past tense.

× I didn't realize the how good is the atmosphere over there in the library

✓ I didn't realize how good the atmosphere was over there in the library

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'how good the atmosphere was' is the correct order for indirect statements in past tense.

× Chinese kid, uh, they have to spend time in school like half of the day

✓ Chinese kids, uh, they have to spend time in school like half of the day

The plural noun 'kids' should be used to agree with the plural pronoun 'they'.