Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar errors and making the response more concise and natural. For example, avoid redundancy like "like once a week" and "and all." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I usually go to the Public Library once a week because it's only a 20-minute walk from my house. I prefer spending my spare time there reading storybooks and motivational books, which I find very enjoyable.

提案: Your answer provides relevant details but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'so' more effectively and avoid redundancy such as 'like to prefer.' Also, improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: I usually go to the library to read storybooks and motivational books because they help me relax and learn new things. Moreover, the quiet atmosphere makes it an ideal place to focus and enjoy my reading.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting tense consistency and making the response more natural. Avoid repeating 'so' and clarify the timing more smoothly.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library at my school when I was a child. My teacher would take us there during free periods, so I visited that library only during my childhood.

提案: Your answer is honest but lacks confidence and specific content. Try to avoid repeating words and provide a more general opinion or reasoning. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your thoughts clearly.

例: I'm not very familiar with the habits of Chinese kids, but I believe that many of them visit libraries to explore new knowledge and improve their learning.

× It because the library is very near to my house.

✓ It is because the library is very near to my house.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'It'. In English, 'There be' issues refer to missing or incorrect forms of 'to be' verbs. Here, 'It' requires the verb 'is' to form a correct sentence: 'It is because...'.

× So I always prefer to go to library in my spare time and read some books like story books, motivational books and all.

✓ So I always prefer to go to the library in my spare time and read some books like story books, motivational books and all.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is an article error.

× Usually I go to the library for reading some books, for example story books and motivational books because it keeps me more relax and learn new things.

✓ Usually I go to the library to read some books, for example story books and motivational books because it keeps me more relaxed and helps me learn new things.

The phrase 'for reading' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to read' when expressing purpose. Also, 'relax' should be the adjective 'relaxed' to describe the state, and 'learn' needs a helping verb 'helps me' to be grammatically correct.

× So I like to prefer reading books over there.

✓ So I prefer reading books there.

The phrase 'like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone suffices. Also, 'over there' is unnecessary; 'there' is more natural. The preposition 'over' is incorrectly used here.

× So I go to that library only when I was a child.

✓ So I went to that library only when I was a child.

The verb 'go' is in present tense but the sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'). The verb should be in past tense 'went' to maintain tense consistency.

× Actually, to be very honest, I'm not sure about Chinese kid because I don't have knowledge about that country and I also don't have any friends from that area.

✓ Actually, to be very honest, I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I don't have knowledge about that country and I also don't have any friends from that area.

'Kid' is singular but the context implies a general statement about children, so the plural 'kids' is appropriate.

× But I think they they should go to the library and explore new things over there.

✓ But I think they should go to the library and explore new things over there.

The pronoun 'they' is repeated twice, which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'they' corrects the sentence.