Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I only go to the library when I need to borrow books" and then giving an example that repeats the same idea. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add a bit more detail about your own habits.

例: I usually visit the library to borrow books for my child, especially during the summer when he tends to read less because we run out of interesting books at home.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, try to avoid repeating words like "book" and "read" too closely. Adding a bit more detail about how you choose the books would enrich your answer.

例: In the library, I usually look for age-appropriate and engaging books for my child so that he stays motivated to read and complete them.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and wordy. Try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid awkward phrasing like "most of the time is you have to access." Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because it was essential for finding resources to complete my school homework and assignments.

提案: Your answer is thoughtful but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid phrases like "every children" and improve sentence flow with linking words. Also, try to give a more specific opinion or example related to Chinese kids.

例: I believe Chinese children often visit libraries because, like kids everywhere, they need access to study materials and resources to support their learning.

× I think every children, regardless of their culture, needs to access the library to get resources and materials they needed for them to study.

✓ I think every child, regardless of their culture, needs to access the library to get resources and materials they need to study.

The word 'children' is plural, but 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'child' is correct here. Also, 'they needed' should be 'they need' to maintain present tense and agreement with the context.

× I think every children, regardless of their culture, needs to access the library to get resources and materials they needed for them to study.

✓ I think every child, regardless of their culture, needs to access the library to get resources and materials they need to study.

The phrase 'they needed' is in past tense, but the sentence is discussing a general truth, so present tense 'they need' is appropriate.

× What I normally do in the library is I find books for my child that is interesting and engaging for his age.

✓ What I normally do in the library is I find books for my child that are interesting and engaging for his age.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'books', which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.