Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingiz tabiiy va aniq, lekin "quiet and convenient place" iborasini yaxshilab kengaytirishingiz mumkin. Masalan, "quiet and convenient place" o'rniga "quiet and well-equipped place" yoki "quiet and comfortable environment" deb aytishingiz mumkin. Shuningdek, "to do the homework or study" o'rniga "to do my homework or study effectively" deb qo'shimcha ma'lumot berishingiz mumkin.

例: Yes, I frequently go to the library because it's a quiet and well-equipped place where I can do my homework or study effectively.

提案: Javobingizda takrorlanish va grammatik xatolar mavjud. Masalan, "to commit our to commit our task" iborasi noto'g'ri. Shuningdek, gaplarni bog'lash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, "because" o'rniga "since" yoki "as" ishlatishingiz mumkin. Javobni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri shaklda ifodalashga harakat qiling.

例: Usually, I go to the library to study and do my homework. Additionally, when I have group projects, my mates and I work together there since it is convenient and has plenty of equipment to complete our tasks.

提案: Javobingizda gaplar biroz uzun va murakkab. "and after I started to do my homework at school time" qismi noaniq. Bu qismni aniqroq qilib, bog'lovchi so'zlar yordamida yaxshilang. Masalan, "and since then, I have loved the library because of its quiet environment, especially when I started doing my homework during school time."

例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my mom, and since then, I have loved the library because of its quiet environment, especially when I started doing my homework during school time.

提案: Javobingizda takrorlanish va grammatik xatolar bor, masalan, "They they" va "put very high importance for study" o'rniga "place great importance on studying" deyish kerak. Gaplarni bog'lash uchun "because", "so", "therefore" kabi bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Javobni yanada tabiiy va aniqroq qilish uchun gaplarni qisqartiring va yaxshilang.

例: I believe so because Chinese people are very hardworking and place great importance on studying. Therefore, they encourage their children to study and learn, which is why many Chinese kids often go to the library.

× Yes, I frequently go to the library because it's very quiet and convenient place to do the homework or study.

✓ Yes, I frequently go to the library because it's a very quiet and convenient place to do homework or study.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very quiet and convenient place'. Also, 'the homework' should be 'homework' because 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not require 'the' in this context.

× We do it together because it's very convenient and there is a lot of equipment to commit our to commit our task.

✓ We do it together because it's very convenient and there is a lot of equipment to complete our task.

The phrase 'to commit our task' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'complete' when referring to finishing a task. Also, the repetition 'to commit our to commit our task' is an error.

× Yes, we used to go to the library with my mom and from that time I started to love the library because of its quiet environment and after I started to do my homework at school time.

✓ Yes, we used to go to the library with my mom and from that time I started to love the library because of its quiet environment, and after that, I started to do my homework during school time.

The phrase 'at school time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'during' when referring to a period of time. Also, adding 'after that' improves clarity.

× I believe yes, because the Chinese are very hardworking. They they put very high importance for study, so they encourage their children or school children to study and learn. So they really love libraries.

✓ I believe yes, because the Chinese are very hardworking. They put very high importance on study, so they encourage their children or school children to study and learn. So they really love libraries.

The sentence has a repeated word 'They they' which is a typographical error. Also, the phrase 'put very high importance for study' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' after 'importance'.