Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'sometime' nên là 'sometimes', và sử dụng câu đơn giản, trực tiếp hơn. Bạn nên thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và có cấu trúc hơn.

例: Yes, I sometimes go to the library with my friends because borrowing books is cheaper than buying them. It helps me read more and gain knowledge.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a cheaper than boring them' thành 'because it is cheaper than buying them'.

例: Usually, I borrow books from the library because it is cheaper than buying them. Also, I find the library a quiet and comfortable place to study and improve my knowledge.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'in tech of' thành 'instead of'. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn.

例: Yes, I often went to the library with my friends when I was a kid because borrowing books was more affordable than buying them. The library was a quiet and comfortable place to study and learn about different topics.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi hoặc nói rõ bạn không biết bằng cách sử dụng câu đơn giản và đúng ngữ pháp.

例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think many of them do because libraries are useful for studying.

× Yes, I sometime go to the library with my friend and they go to the library to borrow the books because it's cheaper than we bought them.

✓ Yes, I sometimes go to the library with my friends and they go to the library to borrow books because it's cheaper than buying them.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (Grammar problem type 6). 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'they'. 'The books' should be 'books' without 'the' as it refers to books in general (Grammar problem type 22). 'We bought them' is incorrect; it should be 'buying them' to express comparison (Grammar problem type 5 and 11).

× It helped me reading books, it helped me knowledge.

✓ It helped me read books and gain knowledge.

After 'helped me', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form (Grammar problem type 8). Also, 'helped me knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'helped me gain knowledge' to make sense.

× Yes, I sometimes go to the library with my friends because they like to borrow books with a cheaper than boring them.

✓ Yes, I sometimes go to the library with my friends because they like to borrow books because it's cheaper than buying them.

'With a cheaper' is incorrect; it should be 'because it's cheaper' (Grammar problem type 11). 'Boring them' is a misspelling of 'buying them' (Grammar problem type 26).

× Going to library helps me read more books and gain knowledge on different topics and find it a quick and comfortable place to study and improve.

✓ Going to the library helps me read more books, gain knowledge on different topics, and I find it a quick and comfortable place to study and improve.

Missing article 'the' before 'library' (Grammar problem type 22). The sentence structure is awkward; adding 'I' before 'find' clarifies the subject (Grammar problem type 26).

× Yes, I sometimes go into the library with my friends because they prefer to borrow books in tech of buying them makes it more affordable.

✓ Yes, I sometimes go to the library with my friends because they prefer to borrow books instead of buying them as it makes it more affordable.

'Go into the library' is less common than 'go to the library' (Grammar problem type 11). 'In tech of' is incorrect; it should be 'instead of' (Grammar problem type 11). The sentence needs 'as' to connect the clauses properly (Grammar problem type 26).

× I find the library a quick and comfortable place to study and it helped me read more books or different topic to explain my knowledge.

✓ I find the library a quick and comfortable place to study and it helped me read more books on different topics to improve my knowledge.

'Or different topic' should be 'on different topics' to be plural and correct preposition (Grammar problem type 11 and 1). 'Explain my knowledge' is incorrect; 'improve my knowledge' is more appropriate (Grammar problem type 13).

× I don't know the kiss trying to go to the libraries.

✓ I don't know if kids often go to the libraries.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors: 'the kiss' should be 'if kids' and 'trying to go' is incorrect in this context (Grammar problem type 26). The corrected sentence properly expresses uncertainty about the frequency of kids going to libraries.