Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to use articles correctly ('the library') and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your activities with better phrasing and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I often go to the library to study and sometimes to use the copy machine for scanning documents.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Usually, I study for my exams in the library because it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate better.

提案: Your answer is quite good but contains a small error ('paying outside' should be 'playing outside'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

例: When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I wasn't very interested in reading books. Instead, I preferred playing outside or watching TV.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, use correct articles and plural forms where necessary.

例: In China, many kids go to the library to study, especially if their parents are strict and want them to achieve good academic results.

× I quite often go to library for studying or doing some admin like a copy scans using their copy machine.

✓ I quite often go to the library for studying or doing some admin like copying scans using their copy machine.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both the speaker and listener. Also, 'copy scans' is incorrect; it should be 'copying scans' to correctly express the action.

× As I mentioned before, I would I was studying my exam in my library because it provide a quite. To let me.

✓ As I mentioned before, I was studying for my exam in the library because it provides quiet to let me concentrate.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Quite' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'quiet'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× As I mentioned before, I would I was studying my exam in my library because it provide a quite. To let me.

✓ As I mentioned before, I was studying for my exam in the library because it provides quiet to let me concentrate.

The phrase 'I would I was studying' is incorrect. The past tense 'I was studying' is appropriate here to describe a past action. Also, 'studying my exam' should be 'studying for my exam' to correctly express preparation.

× When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I wasn't very interested in reading books. I prefer spending my time paying outside or watching TV rather than sitting quietly with the book.

✓ When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I wasn't very interested in reading books. I preferred spending my time playing outside or watching TV rather than sitting quietly with a book.

The verb 'prefer' should be in the past tense 'preferred' to match the past time frame. 'Paying outside' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'playing outside'. Also, 'with the book' should be 'with a book' as it refers to any book, not a specific one.

× When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I wasn't very interested in reading books. I prefer spending my time paying outside or watching TV rather than sitting quietly with the book.

✓ When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I wasn't very interested in reading books. I preferred spending my time playing outside or watching TV rather than sitting quietly with a book.

The definite article 'the' before 'book' is incorrect here because it does not refer to a specific book. The indefinite article 'a' should be used instead.

× If you have very strict parents to pushing your academic results standing out the kid, the kid would always go to library for studying to achieve their good outcome.

✓ If you have very strict parents pushing you to stand out academically, the kid would always go to the library for studying to achieve good results.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. The original sentence has awkward phrasing; 'pushing your academic results standing out the kid' is incorrect. It is corrected to 'pushing you to stand out academically' for clarity and correctness.

× If you have very strict parents to pushing your academic results standing out the kid, the kid would always go to library for studying to achieve their good outcome.

✓ If you have very strict parents pushing you to stand out academically, the kid would always go to the library for studying to achieve good results.

The pronouns 'your' and 'the kid' are inconsistently used. It is clearer to use 'you' consistently when referring to the child. Also, 'their good outcome' is vague; 'good results' is more appropriate.