Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ немного повторяется и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь сделать ответ более естественным и связным, избегая повторов и исправляя ошибки. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading books. It is a great place to find information for my work and studies, especially when I cannot find reliable information on the Internet.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова и более разнообразную лексику, чтобы сделать ответ более плавным и информативным.

例: Usually, I visit the library to find information for my school projects because sometimes the Internet does not have the resources I need. Moreover, the library offers a wide range of materials that help me study better.

提案: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит много повторений и грамматических ошибок. Постарайтесь структурировать ответ, используя связующие слова и избегая излишних повторов.

例: When I was young, I never went to the library because there wasn't one in my city. However, now there is a library, although it is quite far, I try to visit it whenever I can.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для улучшения связности и естественности речи.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Uzbekistan, children often go to the library because they enjoy reading and find useful information for their schoolwork there.

× I really love reading books.

✓ I really love reading books.

No correction needed here; 'love reading' is correct usage of verb + -ing form.

× I can't find in from the Internet information about about joke.

✓ I can't find information about jokes on the Internet.

The prepositions 'in' and 'from' are incorrectly used together. The correct preposition to indicate source is 'on' for the Internet. Also, 'about about' is a repetition error and 'joke' should be plural 'jokes' to match the context.

× I go to the library for find information for my school because I can't find another information from the Internet.

✓ I go to the library to find information for my school because I can't find other information on the Internet.

After 'go to the library', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to find' not 'for find'. Also, 'another information' is incorrect; 'other information' is correct because 'information' is uncountable. Preposition 'from' should be 'on' when referring to the Internet.

× I can't find another information from the Internet.

✓ I can't find other information on the Internet.

'Information' is an uncountable noun, so 'another' is incorrect. Use 'other' instead. Also, preposition 'from' should be 'on' when referring to the Internet.

× in my city there aren't, there aren't any library

✓ in my city there isn't any library

'Library' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'isn't' not plural 'aren't'. Also, 'any' is correctly used with singular countable noun here.

× and but nowadays there is a library, but it's too far for me and but I try to go to the library.

✓ but nowadays there is a library, but it's too far for me, but I try to go to the library.

Using both 'and' and 'but' together is incorrect. Choose one conjunction to maintain sentence clarity.

× When I when I was young, I never go to the library

✓ When I was young, I never went to the library

The past tense 'went' should be used to match the past time reference 'when I was young'.

× they really like, really, really enjoy go to the library

✓ they really like, really, really enjoy going to the library

After verbs like 'enjoy', the verb should be in the -ing form, so 'go' should be 'going'.