Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Misalnya, gunakan 'I often go to the library' dan tambahkan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran. Hindari pengulangan kata 'do' dan perbaiki frasa seperti 'need borrow' menjadi 'need to borrow'.

例: Yes, I often go to the library in my city because I need to borrow books for reference when writing my journal and articles.

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan kosakata dan tata bahasa, serta buat kalimat lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Gunakan kata penghubung seperti 'first', 'then', dan 'if' dengan benar. Hindari kalimat yang tidak jelas seperti 'go to the absence'.

例: First, I go to the library desk to check in, then I read the books from my list. If I need a book, I take it with me. I usually spend a lot of time reading in the library.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Gunakan bentuk lampau yang tepat seperti 'had' dan perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan efektif.

例: If you mean the big library in my city, no. When I was a kid, I had a library at home, so I could read books there.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih alami. Gunakan frasa yang tepat seperti 'often go to the library' dan hindari penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat seperti 'could be often to go'.

例: Actually, I don't know because I haven't had any Chinese friends since I was a kid. However, I think they often go to the library to seek knowledge.

× Yes, I do often go to the library in my city because I need borrow some books for reference of my journal and article.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library in my city because I need to borrow some books for reference for my journal and article.

The verb 'need' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'borrow' to form the correct infinitive structure 'need to borrow'. Also, 'for reference of my journal and article' should be 'for reference for my journal and article' to use the correct preposition 'for'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan bentuk kata kerja setelah 'need' yang harus menggunakan infinitive 'to borrow'. Selain itu, preposisi yang tepat setelah 'reference' adalah 'for', bukan 'of'.

× Yes, I do often go to the library in my city because I need borrow some books for reference of my journal and article.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library in my city because I need to borrow some books for reference for my journal and article.

The phrase 'reference of my journal and article' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' as in 'reference for my journal and article'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan preposisi yang salah setelah kata 'reference'. Preposisi yang benar adalah 'for'.

× 1st I go to the absence and then I read the book from my list and then I pull up that book if I needed to.

✓ First, I go to the aisle and then I read the books from my list and then I pull up that book if I need to.

The word 'absence' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'aisle' which means a passage in the library. Also, 'if I needed to' should be 'if I need to' to match the present tense context. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan kata yang salah ('absence' seharusnya 'aisle') dan ketidaksesuaian waktu pada 'needed' yang harusnya 'need'.

× 1st I go to the absence and then I read the book from my list and then I pull up that book if I needed to.

✓ First, I go to the aisle and then I read the books from my list and then I pull up that book if I need to.

The phrase 'read the book from my list' is incorrect because 'list' likely contains multiple books, so 'books' should be plural. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena ketidaksesuaian antara jumlah benda dan kata yang digunakan; 'book' harusnya 'books' karena merujuk pada beberapa buku.

× And yes, spend a lot of time for reading a book in library.

✓ And yes, I spend a lot of time reading books in the library.

The sentence lacks a subject 'I'. Also, 'for reading a book' should be 'reading books' without 'for' and plural 'books' to generalize. 'In library' needs the definite article 'the'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena tidak adanya subjek, penggunaan preposisi yang salah, dan kurangnya artikel yang tepat.

× If you talk about a big library in my city, no, because when I was a kid I have a library in my house so I can read book from there.

✓ If you talk about a big library in my city, no, because when I was a kid I had a library in my house so I could read books from there.

The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'can' should be 'could' for past ability. 'Read book' should be 'read books' plural. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena ketidaksesuaian waktu pada kata kerja dan penggunaan bentuk jamak yang tepat.

× If you talk about a big library in my city, no, because when I was a kid I have a library in my house so I can read book from there.

✓ If you talk about a big library in my city, no, because when I was a kid I had a library in my house so I could read books from there.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan bentuk tunggal 'book' yang seharusnya jamak 'books'.

× If you talk about a big library in my city, no, because when I was a kid I have a library in my house so I can read book from there.

✓ If you talk about a big library in my city, no, because when I was a kid I had a library in my house so I could read books from there.

The modal verb 'can' should be changed to 'could' to indicate past ability. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan modal verb yang tidak sesuai dengan waktu kejadian.

× Actually I don't know because I don't have any Chinese friends since I was a kid, so I think yes, they could be often to go to the library for seeking some knowledge.

✓ Actually, I don't know because I haven't had any Chinese friends since I was a kid, so I think yes, they often go to the library to seek some knowledge.

'Could be often to go' is incorrect; 'often go' is the correct form. Also, 'for seeking' should be 'to seek'. 'Don't have' with 'since' should be present perfect 'haven't had'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan modal verb yang salah, preposisi yang tidak tepat, dan bentuk waktu yang tidak sesuai.

× Actually I don't know because I don't have any Chinese friends since I was a kid, so I think yes, they could be often to go to the library for seeking some knowledge.

✓ Actually, I don't know because I haven't had any Chinese friends since I was a kid, so I think yes, they often go to the library to seek some knowledge.

The phrase 'I don't have any Chinese friends since I was a kid' is incorrect because 'since' requires present perfect tense 'haven't had'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan bentuk waktu yang salah dengan kata 'since' yang harus diikuti oleh present perfect.