Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa to kouryaku-sei o takameru tame ni, kurikaeshi ya fukuzatsu na kotoba o sakete, motto shourai-teki na jouhou o kuwaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Tatoeba, "I often go to the library near my house because it helps me focus and enjoy reading. I have been doing this since I was a child, which has helped me develop a strong reading habit." to iu fuu ni kotaeru to yoi desu.

例: Yes, I often go to the library near my house because it provides a quiet environment for reading. I have been visiting it almost every day since I was a child, which helped me develop a strong reading habit.

提案: Kotae wa rikai-shiyasuku, shizen ni shite, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya kurikaeshi o sakete kudasai. Mata, rikai o fukameru tame ni, riyuu ya jissai no jirei o kuwaeru to yoi desu. Tatoeba, "I usually read books in the library because it has a peaceful atmosphere. Sometimes, I study there as well since it's easy to concentrate." to kotaeru to yoi desu.

例: I usually read books in the library because it has a peaceful atmosphere. Sometimes, I study there as well since it's easy to concentrate in such a calm environment.

提案: Kurikaeshi ya fukuzatsu na kotoba o sakete, motto shourai-teki na jouhou o kuwaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Mata, rikai o fukameru tame ni, riyuu ya jissai no jirei o kuwaeru to yoi desu. Tatoeba, "Yes, I went to the library as a child because I enjoyed reading. I especially liked mathematics books since I was interested in maths and science." to kotaeru to yoi desu.

例: Yes, I went to the library as a child because I enjoyed reading. I especially liked mathematics books since I was interested in maths and science.

提案: Kotae wa motto shizen ni shite, kurikaeshi o sakete, motto shourai-teki na jouhou o kuwaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Mata, rikai o fukameru tame ni, riyuu ya jissai no jirei o kuwaeru to yoi desu. Tatoeba, "I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many of them go to the library because they study hard and value education." to kotaeru to yoi desu.

例: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many of them go to the library because they study hard and value education.

× Yes, of course I do. I I go to the library near my house almost every day and this habit started since I was I was a child and this helped me to cultivate my habit of reading.

✓ Yes, of course I do. I go to the library near my house almost every day, and this habit started when I was a child. It has helped me cultivate my habit of reading.

The original sentence contains repeated words ('I I', 'I was I was') and run-on structure. The phrase 'started since I was a child' is incorrect; 'started when I was a child' is correct. Also, 'this helped me to cultivate my habit of reading' is better expressed as 'It has helped me cultivate my habit of reading' to show ongoing effect.

× Well, normally I read books in the library, of course that is the main purpose of library.

✓ Well, normally I read books in the library; of course, that is the main purpose of the library.

The phrase 'main purpose of library' lacks the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'the library', the definite article is required.

× But sometimes I will study there because the environment is quite calm and tranquil and easy to concentrate on.

✓ But sometimes I study there because the environment is quite calm and tranquil and easy to concentrate in.

Using 'will' to express habitual actions is incorrect here; simple present tense 'I study' is appropriate. Also, the preposition 'on' after 'concentrate' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in'.

× Yes I did because I I have liked reading since I was a child and when when I was a child I used to read those mathematics mathematics books and that is because I like maths and sciences.

✓ Yes, I did because I have liked reading since I was a child, and when I was a child, I used to read mathematics books because I like maths and sciences.

Repeated words ('I I', 'when when', 'mathematics mathematics') should be removed. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity. 'That is because' can be simplified to 'because'. The tense 'have liked' is correct to express a continuing state from past to present.

× I I'm not quite sure about about the reading habits of Chinese kids, but I guess they do because in my knowledge Chinese kids study very hard.

✓ I'm not quite sure about the reading habits of Chinese kids, but I guess they do because, to my knowledge, Chinese kids study very hard.

Repeated word 'about' should be removed. The phrase 'in my knowledge' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'to my knowledge'. Also, the sentence is improved by adding commas for clarity.