Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Yes, I went to library in my extra time for reading a books and borrow borrow books book. I like books. So I.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
I usually read a book. I like a book for the studying social science and political science I. Want to major in social science so I always read it.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Of course I went to library who read the books and my kid. I always go to library with my friend and hanging around and read a book and study.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
Yes, Chinese kid often go to the library because Chinese have a very highly education fever so they are always have to study in library and always go to the library.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 50.0提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 중복된 단어가 많아 자연스럽지 않습니다. 또한, 문장이 완성되지 않아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 중복을 피하고, 문법적으로 올바른 표현을 사용해야 합니다.
例: Yes, I often go to the library in my free time to read and borrow books because I really enjoy reading.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 55.0提案: 문장이 부자연스럽고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 주제를 명확히 하고, 이유를 연결어로 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 구체적인 내용을 더 추가하면 좋습니다.
例: I usually read books related to social science and political science because I want to major in social science at university.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 45.0提案: 문장이 혼란스럽고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 불필요한 중복을 피하고 간결하게 표현해야 합니다.
例: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my friends to read books and study together.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 50.0提案: 문법 오류와 부자연스러운 표현이 많습니다. 'education fever' 같은 표현 대신 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.
例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because education is very important in China, so they spend a lot of time studying there.
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