Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复和语气词，句子结构应更清晰，表达更自然。可以简洁地说明去图书馆的频率和原因。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place where I can enjoy reading and relax after a busy day.

提案: 回答应更有条理，避免重复和语法错误。应直接回答问题并用连接词组织内容。

例: Usually, I read books in the library, but sometimes I also listen to music or chat with my friends in designated areas.

提案: 回答应注意时态一致，避免语法错误。内容应更具体，表达更流畅。

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library because we didn't have computers or mobile phones, so it was a great place to read and spend time with friends.

提案: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误和不完整的句子。应具体说明原因并用连接词连接句子。

例: In the past, Chinese children rarely went to libraries because there were few of them. However, nowadays, more children visit libraries as their facilities have greatly improved.

× Of course, the library is a relaxed place for us who have two years old daughter and I often go to the library, uh, in search of, uh, reading and excitement for myself.

✓ Of course, the library is a relaxed place for us who have a two-year-old daughter and I often go to the library, uh, in search of, uh, reading and excitement for myself.

“two years old daughter”中“years”应为单数形式“year”，且“two-year-old”作为复合形容词修饰“daughter”，需要用连字符连接。

× Actually, I do a lot of things in the library such as reading. It's the basic work and I often go to a library to just play my mobile phones or listen to the music or chat with my friends in the specific specific.

✓ Actually, I do a lot of things in the library such as reading. It's the basic work and I often go to the library to just play on my mobile phone or listen to music or chat with my friends in a specific place.

“play my mobile phones”应为“play on my mobile phone”，手机是单数且“play on”是正确搭配；“listen to the music”中“the”不需要，通常说“listen to music”；“in the specific specific”表达不完整，应为“in a specific place”。

× Yes, of course you know that when I was a kid I don't have any computers or mobile phones such as electrical tools, and I often go to the library to read, to listen to the music and chat with my friends in a specific place.

✓ Yes, of course you know that when I was a kid I didn't have any computers or mobile phones such as electrical tools, and I often went to the library to read, to listen to music and chat with my friends in a specific place.

描述过去的情况时，动词应使用过去时态，“don't have”应改为“didn't have”，“often go”应改为“often went”；“listen to the music”中“the”不需要。

× Actually, in early times, Chinese kids do not often go to library, because the library is not very many, the number is not very large.

✓ Actually, in early times, Chinese kids did not often go to libraries, because there were not many libraries, the number was not very large.

“go to library”应为“go to libraries”，图书馆复数形式；“library is not very many”表达错误，应改为“there were not many libraries”；“number is not very large”时态应与上下文一致，改为过去时“was”。

× And in these days Chinese kids often go to a library. The basic manufacture is very good, just compare with.

✓ And nowadays Chinese kids often go to libraries. The basic facilities are very good, just compared with before.

“in these days”应为“nowadays”；“go to a library”应为复数“go to libraries”；“basic manufacture”用词错误，应为“basic facilities”；“just compare with”不完整，应为“just compared with before”。