Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點不自然且語法錯誤，建議使用簡潔且正確的句子來表達。例如，直接說明你去圖書館的頻率，並具體說明借閱的書籍類型。

例: Yes, I usually go to the library about three times a week. I often borrow books related to political science or Japanese language to support my studies.

提案: 回答中語法和用詞不正確，建議先直接回答問題，再用連接詞補充細節，並使用正確的動詞和句型。

例: I usually study my major subjects like political science and Japanese language in the library. Besides that, I also work on projects or discuss topics with my friends there.

提案: 回答有些不流暢且語法錯誤，建議使用完整且清晰的句子，並避免重複和不必要的填充詞。

例: Yes, I definitely went to the library as a child. My mom often took me there on Saturdays, where a storyteller would read stories like Snow White to the children.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，建議先直接回答問題，再用連接詞補充原因，並使用正確的動詞和名詞。

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it provides many books. They can gain knowledge, learn new things, and even make new friends there.

× Yes, I always started in the library maybe three times a week as it's quite often.

✓ Yes, I always start in the library maybe three times a week as it's quite often.

The sentence is describing a habitual action in the present, so the verb should be in the present tense 'start' instead of the past tense 'started'.

× And besides starting that, I also maybe borrow books, something such as the comparative government or something about the political science or the Japanese, Japan.

✓ And besides doing that, I also maybe borrow books, something such as comparative government or something about political science or Japanese language.

The phrase 'besides starting that' is incorrect; 'besides' should be followed by a gerund form, so 'doing' is correct. Also, 'the comparative government' and 'the political science' should be without 'the' as they are general subjects, and 'the Japanese, Japan' is unclear and corrected to 'Japanese language'.

× I usually starting my majors such as political science or the Japanese language or something like the international relationship that beside the list we.

✓ I usually study my majors such as political science or Japanese language or something like international relations besides the list we have.

'Usually starting' is incorrect; 'usually' should be followed by the base verb 'study' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'the international relationship' should be plural 'international relations' and 'beside' should be 'besides'.

× I also will during something project or discuss with my friend with some topics that we.

✓ I also will do some projects or discuss some topics with my friends.

'Will during something project' is incorrect; 'will do some projects' is correct. Also, 'discuss with my friend with some topics that we' is awkward and corrected to 'discuss some topics with my friends'.

× My mom always took me to the library when I was a kid and there's a storyteller layered and every Saturday afternoon and she will tell a story like, umm, sometimes Snow White or large.

✓ My mom always took me to the library when I was a kid and there was a storyteller there every Saturday afternoon who would tell stories like, umm, sometimes Snow White or others.

'There's a storyteller layered' is incorrect; it should be 'there was a storyteller there'. Also, 'she will tell a story like' is better as 'who would tell stories like'. 'Large' is unclear and replaced with 'others'.

× Yes, I was a Chinese kids. They often go to the library since it's a place that provide a lot of books and we can get a lot of knowledge and learn something new or even make new friends layered.

✓ Yes, I was a Chinese kid. Chinese kids often go to the library since it's a place that provides a lot of books and we can get a lot of knowledge and learn something new or even make new friends there.

'I was a Chinese kids' is incorrect; 'kid' should be singular to match 'I'. 'They often go' is fine but better to say 'Chinese kids often go'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular 'place'. 'Layered' is incorrect and replaced with 'there'.