Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ như 'it's offer' nên là 'it offers'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh thừa từ. Hãy chú ý sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it offers a quiet environment for studying. Moreover, I prefer borrowing books since it is more affordable than buying them.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'needed need' và câu hơi dài, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I usually read books and do my homework in the library because it is quiet. This helps me concentrate better, especially when I need to complete assignments without distractions.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'brow books' (có thể là 'borrow books'), 'their scene is worth cheaper' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chọn từ phù hợp, đồng thời cấu trúc câu cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I loved reading novels and stories. I enjoyed borrowing books since it was cheaper than buying them, and it gave me access to many different genres.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như 'which help them improve' nên là 'which helps them improve'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp số ít, số nhiều để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a quiet place to study and find useful information. For example, many students visit the library to do their homework or prepare for exams, which helps them improve their knowledge.

× Yes, I often go to the library to study and read books because it's offer a quiet environment.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to study and read books because it offers a quiet environment.

The verb 'offer' should be in the third person singular form 'offers' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× I also prefer drawing books than since it is a more affordable than buying them.

✓ I also prefer borrowing books since it is more affordable than buying them.

The phrase 'drawing books' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'borrowing' when taking books temporarily. Also, 'than since' is incorrect; 'since' alone is appropriate here. The article 'a' before 'more affordable' is unnecessary.

× I find it easy to focus on studying there, especially when I needed need to read and or complete assignments without directions.

✓ I find it easy to focus on studying there, especially when I need to read or complete assignments without directions.

The phrase 'needed need' is incorrect; the correct form is 'need' to match the present tense context. Also, 'and or' should be 'or' to indicate alternatives.

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I loved reading novels and story.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I loved reading novels and stories.

The word 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the plural 'novels' and to correctly refer to multiple items.

× I enjoy brow books, their scene is worth cheaper than buying them and it gave me access to many different genres.

✓ I enjoy borrowing books; their scene is much cheaper than buying them and it gave me access to many different genres.

The word 'brow' is a typo and should be 'borrowing'. The phrase 'their scene is worth cheaper' is incorrect; it should be 'they are much cheaper'. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× For example, many students visit the library to do their homework or prepare the exam, which help them improve.

✓ For example, many students visit the library to do their homework or prepare for the exam, which helps them improve.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to the act of visiting the library. Also, 'prepare the exam' should be 'prepare for the exam' to use the correct preposition.