Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and natural. For example, you can say: "No, I don't go to the library often because I have a personal library at home. I enjoy reading there because it has a unique atmosphere."

例: No, I don't go to the library often because I have a personal library at home. I enjoy reading there because it has a unique atmosphere.

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is repetitive and filled with filler words like "uh" and "umm." Try to avoid fillers and redundancy by combining ideas smoothly using linking words. For example, you can say: "When I go to the library, I usually study and read because I enjoy learning. Sometimes, I also relax or practice new languages there."

例: When I go to the library, I usually study and read because I enjoy learning. Sometimes, I also relax or practice new languages there.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use past tense consistently and provide clear, specific details. Also, avoid filler words. For example: "When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I had a personal collection of books at home. My mother used to read bedtime stories to me, which I really enjoyed."

例: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I had a personal collection of books at home. My mother used to read bedtime stories to me, which I really enjoyed.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words and grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. For example: "Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because studying is very important in China. The library provides a quiet place for them to focus and improve their learning."

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because studying is very important in China. The library provides a quiet place for them to focus and improve their learning.

× No, unfortunately I don't go often to the library.

✓ No, unfortunately I don't often go to the library.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'go' rather than after the auxiliary verb 'don't' and before the prepositional phrase 'to the library' for correct word order in English.

× I never have been in library and it's so silly and make me blue because I'm like reading so much.

✓ I have never been to the library and it's so silly and makes me blue because I like reading so much.

The phrase 'have been in library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' for visiting places. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'I'm like reading' should be 'I like reading' as 'like' is a verb expressing preference.

× I have my own library in my home and I think library has a any her own vibe.

✓ I have my own library in my home and I think the library has its own vibe.

The noun 'library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. 'a any her own vibe' is incorrect; it should be 'its own vibe' to show possession by the library.

× When I was a kid, I don't go to library because I have, uh, I had my own uh, library and it's, and it's was so attractive.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I had my own library and it was so attractive.

The past tense is required for actions in the past: 'don't go' should be 'didn't go', 'have' should be 'had', and 'it's was' is incorrect; it should be 'it was'. Also, 'to library' needs the article 'the'.

× My mother always reading for me books, uh, tonight and uh, it was so good vibe.

✓ My mother always read books to me at night and it was such a good vibe.

The verb tense should be past simple 'read' to match 'always' in past context. The preposition 'for me' is incorrect; 'read books to me' is correct. 'Tonight' is incorrect for past events; 'at night' is appropriate. 'Good vibe' needs an article and adjective order correction to 'such a good vibe'.

× Yeah, Chinese kids, uh, too. I think it's so important in there's uh, things, uh, place because Chinese, uh, kids, umm, study uh, so hard and it's so powerful to do to go, uh, in the library because it make me make them uh.

✓ Yeah, Chinese kids do too. I think it's so important that there's a place like this because Chinese kids study so hard and it's so beneficial for them to go to the library because it helps them.

The original sentence has multiple preposition and structure errors. 'Important in there's things place' is incorrect; it should be 'important that there's a place like this'. 'Make me make them' is unclear and incorrect; 'helps them' conveys the intended meaning. Also, 'do too' is the correct affirmative response.