Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容有些冗长且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I often go to the library, almost every day. When I don't have lessons, I spend about eight hours there studying for my master's degree. I also discuss difficult questions with my friends.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

例: In the library, I usually surf the Internet, solve problems, review my tasks, and discuss tricky questions with my friends.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够准确。建议注意动词时态和代词的正确使用，避免重复词汇，句子结构应更清晰。

例: Yes, I have been going to the library since I was very young because my parents, who are teachers, always encouraged me to read books there.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够自然，且逻辑连接不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I don't think many Chinese kids often go to the library. Nowadays, they prefer playing computer games because they don't consider visiting the library a priority, even though reading books can be very beneficial.

× Once I have no lesson I will go to the library and dedicate it but 8 hours a day to pursue my master degree and chat with my friends about the the hard answers.

✓ Once I have no lessons I will go to the library and dedicate about 8 hours a day to pursue my master's degree and chat with my friends about the hard answers.

这里的lesson应该用复数lessons，因为表示多节课。master degree前应加所有格's，表示“我的硕士学位”。

× Once I have no lesson I will go to the library and dedicate it but 8 hours a day to pursue my master degree and chat with my friends about the the hard answers.

✓ Once I have no lessons I will go to the library and dedicate about 8 hours a day to pursue my master's degree and chat with my friends about the hard answers.

dedicate后面应接介词about表示大约时间，原句用but不合适。

× I surf the Internet, solve problems, reviewed the tasks I have already read or talking with my friends about the the the quiet tricky questions in the field of.

✓ I surf the Internet, solve problems, review the tasks I have already read, or talk with my friends about the quite tricky questions in the field.

reviewed和talking时态不一致，应统一用一般现在时review和talk。

× I surf the Internet, solve problems, reviewed the tasks I have already read or talking with my friends about the the the quiet tricky questions in the field of.

✓ I surf the Internet, solve problems, review the tasks I have already read, or talk with my friends about the quite tricky questions in the field.

about后面应接具体内容，field后缺少具体领域名词，句子不完整。

× Definitely yes, I want to the library since I was very young because both of my parents are teachers and and they always encourage me to go to the library to read your books which can help me a lot all around it.

✓ Definitely yes, I went to the library since I was very young because both of my parents are teachers and they always encourage me to go to the library to read books which can help me a lot.

want应为went，表示过去去过图书馆。your books应改为books，避免人称错误。

× Definitely yes, I want to the library since I was very young because both of my parents are teachers and and they always encourage me to go to the library to read your books which can help me a lot all around it.

✓ Definitely yes, I went to the library since I was very young because both of my parents are teachers and they always encourage me to go to the library to read books which can help me a lot.

your books中的your指代不明，应改为books。

× No, I don't think so. Nowadays Chinese kids prefer to play computer games rather than go to the library because in their opinion going to the library is not their top priority and and read books in the library makes them powerful.

✓ No, I don't think so. Nowadays Chinese kids prefer to play computer games rather than go to the library because, in their opinion, going to the library is not their top priority and reading books in the library does not make them powerful.

and and重复，应去掉一个。read books应改为reading books，保持动名词形式。makes them powerful语义不清，改为does not make them powerful更合理。