Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use complete sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library in my hometown. Recently, I read some interesting books there."

例: Yes, I often go to the library in my hometown. Recently, I read some interesting books there.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your sentences clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "In the library, I usually read Punjabi novels because I enjoy the culture and stories."

例: In the library, I usually read Punjabi novels because I enjoy the culture and stories.

提案: Use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence and add supporting details with linking words. For example, "No, I did not go to the library when I was a child. However, recently I have started visiting the library to read books."

例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child. However, recently I have started visiting the library to read books.

提案: Clarify your answer and avoid unclear words. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I am not sure about Chinese children in general, but in my hometown, some kids do go to the library."

例: I am not sure about Chinese children in general, but in my hometown, some kids do go to the library.

× I usually go to library in my hometown.

✓ I usually go to the library in my hometown.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× Last recent I read some books in library.

✓ Recently, I read some books in the library.

The phrase 'Last recent' is incorrect; 'recently' is the correct adverb to indicate a recent past action. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place.

× Last recent I read some books in library.

✓ Recently, I read some books in the library.

As above, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library.

× in the library I usually do uh, reading some Punjabi novels, uh, and uh also.

✓ In the library, I usually read some Punjabi novels.

The verb 'do' should not be followed by 'reading' in this context. Instead, simply use the verb 'read' to express the habitual action. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'uh' should be omitted for clarity.

× No, when I am a girl, a child, I am I usually not to go in library.

✓ No, when I was a girl, a child, I usually did not go to the library.

The sentence refers to a past time, so 'am' should be changed to 'was' to reflect past tense. Also, 'usually not to go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'usually did not go'. 'In library' should be 'to the library' with the correct preposition and article.

× No, when I am a girl, a child, I am I usually not to go in library.

✓ No, when I was a girl, a child, I usually did not go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× So recently I start going in the library and read some books.

✓ So recently, I have started going to the library and reading some books.

The action started in the recent past and continues, so present perfect tense 'have started' is appropriate. Also, 'going in the library' should be 'going to the library' with the correct preposition.

× So recently I start going in the library and read some books.

✓ So recently, I have started going to the library and reading some books.

The correct preposition with 'going' when referring to a place is 'to', not 'in'.

× I don't know about the Chinese cursor in my hometown.

✓ I don't know about the Chinese children in my hometown.

The word 'cursor' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'children'. Using the correct noun is essential for clarity.

× There are some kids are going in the library.

✓ There are some kids who go to the library.

The sentence incorrectly combines 'There are' with 'are going'. The correct structure is 'There are some kids who go to the library.' Also, 'going in the library' should be 'go to the library' with the correct preposition.