Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: आपके उत्तर में दोहराव और कुछ व्याकरणिक त्रुटियाँ हैं, जैसे 'when when' और वाक्य का अंत अधूरा लग रहा है। आपको अपने उत्तर को संक्षिप्त और स्पष्ट बनाना चाहिए, साथ ही वाक्यों को सही ढंग से पूरा करना चाहिए।

例: I used to visit the library often during my school days because it was a quiet place with many books. However, now I prefer studying at home as it is more comfortable and I can easily access online resources.

提案: आपके उत्तर में कुछ व्याकरणिक त्रुटियाँ और अस्पष्टता है, जैसे 'learning some new basic'। आपको अपने विचारों को स्पष्ट और सटीक शब्दों में व्यक्त करना चाहिए, और वाक्यों को पूरी तरह से समाप्त करना चाहिए।

例: When I visit the library, I usually read novels, especially spiritual fiction, as it broadens my perspective and enhances my imagination. Additionally, I sometimes use online resources to improve my technological skills and learn new things.

提案: आपके उत्तर में बहुत सारे 'uh' जैसे भराव शब्द हैं जो आपकी बात को कम प्रभावी बनाते हैं। आपको अभ्यास करना चाहिए कि आप बिना इन शब्दों के स्पष्ट और आत्मविश्वास से बोलें। साथ ही, वाक्यों को सरल और सटीक बनाएं।

例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because I found it interesting. Reading storybooks and other materials helped me grow, broaden my imagination, and become more creative.

提案: आपका उत्तर प्रश्न से संबंधित नहीं है क्योंकि आपने 'Chinese kids' के बजाय 'Indian people' के बारे में बात की। आपको प्रश्न को ध्यान से सुनकर उसी के अनुसार जवाब देना चाहिए। साथ ही, भराव शब्दों से बचें और वाक्य को स्पष्ट बनाएं।

例: Yes, Chinese kids used to visit libraries frequently in the past. However, nowadays, many prefer using online resources because they are more convenient and easily accessible.

× I used to go to the library quite often when when I was in school, especially the school library and the one near my house because I found it a quiet place to study and access many books.

✓ I used to go to the library quite often when I was in school, especially the school library and the one near my house because I found it a quiet place to study and access many books.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'when when' which is a typographical error and disrupts sentence flow. Removing the duplicate 'when' corrects the sentence structure.

× However, nowadays I prefer reading or researching at home because it is more convenient and comfortable for me and I can easily use online services without.

✓ However, nowadays I prefer reading or researching at home because it is more convenient and comfortable for me and I can easily use online services without any problem.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'without' which is a preposition that requires an object. Adding 'any problem' completes the phrase and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Sometimes I also refer online resources because it really helps me to develop my technological skills and learning some new basic.

✓ Sometimes I also refer to online resources because it really helps me to develop my technological skills and learn some new basics.

The verb 'refer' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the source. Also, 'learning' should be 'learn' to maintain parallel structure with 'helps me to develop'. 'Basic' should be plural 'basics' to refer to fundamental concepts.

× Yes, when I was a child, I usually go to the library, uh, because it's, uh, quite interesting.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I usually went to the library because it was quite interesting.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went'. Also, 'it's' should be 'it was' to match the past context.

× That really helps me to grow, uh, and broaden my, uh, imagination and perspective and make me more creative.

✓ That really helped me to grow and broaden my imagination and perspective and made me more creative.

Since the context is past ('when I was a child'), verbs should be in past tense: 'helps' to 'helped' and 'make' to 'made'. This maintains tense consistency.

× Yes, Indian people often go to the library, uh, in uh, past times, but uh, nowadays, uh, youngsters and people uh, prefer uh, or rely on online sources which really convenient and accessible easily rather than the physical books.

✓ Yes, Indian people often went to the library in the past, but nowadays, youngsters and people prefer or rely on online sources which are really convenient and easily accessible rather than physical books.

'Past times' should be 'the past' for correct expression. 'Often go' should be 'often went' to indicate past habit. 'Which really convenient and accessible easily' lacks verb 'are' and has awkward adverb placement; corrected to 'which are really convenient and easily accessible'. Also, 'the physical books' should be 'physical books' without 'the'.