Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because there aren't any in my country. Instead, I usually buy books from bookstores and read them at home."

例: I don't often go to the library because there aren't any in my country. Instead, I usually buy books from bookstores and read them at home.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs better grammar and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, "In the library, I usually read books and write down meaningful phrases in my notebook. Sometimes, I listen to music while reading."

例: In the library, I usually read books and write down meaningful phrases in my notebook. Sometimes, I listen to music while reading.

提案: Your answer needs more precise grammar and clearer structure. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. For example, "Yes, I went to the library two or three times a month with my mother because she loves reading. We enjoyed reading books there together."

例: Yes, I went to the library two or three times a month with my mother because she loves reading. We enjoyed reading books there together.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, "I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are interested in learning."

例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are interested in learning.

× No, I don't go to library because in my country where I live, we don't have library.

✓ No, I don't go to the library because in my country where I live, we don't have a library.

The noun 'library' is countable and singular here, so it requires an article. 'The library' refers to a specific place, and 'a library' refers to any library. Omitting the article is incorrect in English grammar.

× I especially go to some book shops and buy some books and then come in at my house and read them.

✓ I especially go to some bookshops and buy some books and then come home and read them.

The word 'bookshops' should be one word, and 'come in at my house' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'come home'. Also, 'bookshops' is plural and correctly used here.

× I especially go to some book shops and buy some books and then come in at my house and read them.

✓ I especially go to some bookshops and buy some books and then come home and read them.

The phrase 'come in at my house' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'come home' to indicate returning to one's residence.

× In the library I usually read books, then I write some meaningful phrases or words in my notebooks.

✓ In the library, I usually read books, then I write some meaningful phrases or words in my notebook.

The plural 'notebooks' is incorrect if referring to a single notebook. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase 'In the library'.

× Then also I listen some music and enjoy read books.

✓ Then also I listen to some music and enjoy reading books.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Also, 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'reading'.

× We go to library maybe two or three time in a month.

✓ We went to the library maybe two or three times a month.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the past tense 'went' is needed. 'Library' requires the article 'the'. 'Time' should be plural 'times' when indicating frequency.

× We go to library maybe two or three time in a month.

✓ We went to the library maybe two or three times a month.

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'time' should be plural 'times' when indicating multiple occurrences.

× We enjoy reading books in the library and uh.

✓ We enjoyed reading books in the library.

Since the context is about past events, the past tense 'enjoyed' is appropriate. The sentence should be complete without filler words like 'uh'.

× I don't know about Chinese kids, yeah, but I think yes, Chinese kids go to library maybe.

✓ I don't know about Chinese kids, yeah, but I think yes, Chinese kids go to the library maybe.

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Chinese kids go to library maybe. Always because they are inter intellected.

✓ Chinese kids maybe always go to the library because they are intelligent.

The adverb 'maybe' should be placed before 'always' for correct emphasis. Also, 'inter intellected' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'intelligent'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.