Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về tần suất đến thư viện và mục đích cụ thể khi đọc sách.

例: I don't go to the library very often, but sometimes when I feel stuck with my ideas, I read books about art, architecture, history, and culture. This helps me reflect deeply and find inspiration for my job.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện. Hãy tránh lỗi sai về thì và danh từ số nhiều/số ít.

例: In the library, I usually search for books about fashion, patterns, fabrics, or sketching. These resources help me find inspiration and turn my ideas into actual clothing designs.

提案: Câu trả lời cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và từ vựng phù hợp. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai về động từ và danh từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. I preferred playing with my friends, trying different foods, and watching movies rather than reading books in the library.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh nói lan man. Sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết và nói rõ ý kiến cá nhân. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời logic và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I am not sure, but I think many Chinese children often go to the library because education is very competitive in China. They probably study there to prepare for exams.

× I don't often go to the library but sometime when I stuck in my idea I'm reading so type a book such as art, architecture, history, cultural to reflecting my thought and find my ideas deeply.

✓ I don't often go to the library but sometimes when I am stuck in my ideas, I read books such as those about art, architecture, history, and culture to reflect on my thoughts and find my ideas more deeply.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' because it refers to multiple thoughts. 'So type a book' is incorrect; it should be 'books such as those about' to correctly refer to types of books. 'Cultural' should be 'culture' as a noun. 'To reflecting' should be 'to reflect' (infinitive form). The sentence structure is corrected to improve clarity and grammar.

× I don't often go to the library but sometime when I stuck in my idea I'm reading so type a book such as art, architecture, history, cultural to reflecting my thought and find my ideas deeply.

✓ I don't often go to the library but sometimes when I am stuck in my ideas, I read books such as those about art, architecture, history, and culture to reflect on my thoughts and find my ideas more deeply.

The verb 'stuck' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous passive 'am stuck'. 'I'm reading' is better as 'I read' to indicate habitual action. 'To reflecting' should be 'to reflect' (infinitive). These changes correct tense usage.

× In the library I often searching the type of book have topic about fashion, pattern, fabric or sketching.

✓ In the library, I often search for books that have topics about fashion, patterns, fabrics, or sketching.

The verb 'searching' should be in base form 'search' after 'often' to indicate habitual action. 'Have' should be 'that have' to connect the clause properly. 'Type of book' should be plural 'books' to match the context. 'Pattern' and 'fabric' should be plural to match the list.

× In the library I often searching the type of book have topic about fashion, pattern, fabric or sketching.

✓ In the library, I often search for books that have topics about fashion, patterns, fabrics, or sketching.

'Type of book' should be plural 'books' because multiple books are implied. 'Topic' should be plural 'topics' to match the plural subject. 'Pattern' and 'fabric' should be plural to be consistent in the list.

× All those will help me a lot to find inspiration for my job and make my idea to making clothes come true.

✓ All those will help me a lot to find inspiration for my job and make my ideas come true in making clothes.

'Make my idea to making' is incorrect. It should be 'make my ideas come true' with 'come' as base verb after 'make'. 'Ideas' should be plural. The phrase is restructured for clarity.

× No I didn't. When I was a kid I was so lazy to learning or reading books.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was a kid, I was so lazy to learn or read books.

After 'lazy', the base form of the verb is used, so 'to learning' should be 'to learn' and 'reading' should be 'read'. This corrects the verb form after 'lazy'.

× I was like to go out playing with my friends, try many foods, watching movies rather than feeding books in the library.

✓ I liked to go out playing with my friends, try many foods, and watch movies rather than reading books in the library.

'Was like' should be 'liked' to express preference. 'Feeding books' is incorrect; it should be 'reading books'. The verbs in the list should be parallel: 'playing', 'try', 'watch' changed to 'playing', 'try', 'watch' or better 'play', 'try', 'watch' for parallelism. The sentence is corrected for verb usage and parallel structure.

× I don't have much knowledge about that, but in my opinion, China is one of the biggest and most developed in the world.

✓ I don't have much knowledge about that, but in my opinion, China is one of the biggest and most developed countries in the world.

The phrase 'most developed' needs a noun after it, such as 'countries'. This corrects the sentence structure and makes it complete.

× So it's quite competitive for children to learning very soon.

✓ So it's quite competitive for children to learn very soon.

After 'to', the base form of the verb is used, so 'learning' should be 'learn'. This corrects the infinitive verb form.

× They are so smart, so they might have to learn in the library themselves to, uh, prepare for all of the exam. Very.

✓ They are so smart, so they might have to learn in the library themselves to prepare for all of the exams.

'Exam' should be plural 'exams' to match 'all of the'. The word 'Very' at the end is unnecessary and unclear, so it is removed. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and noun agreement.