Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте лишних слов и пауз, используйте связки для логичности. Например, начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и добавьте конкретные детали.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am preparing for my final exams. Therefore, I usually visit about three to four times a week to study in a quiet environment.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует отвечать прямо, использовать связки и конкретные детали. Опишите, что именно вы делаете в библиотеке, используя правильную лексику и грамматику.

例: In the library, I usually find a quiet spot to read and write. I focus on my own books and study materials rather than borrowing books from the library.

提案: Ответ следует сделать более связным и грамматически правильным. Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и добавьте детали, используя связки.

例: No, I did not go to the library often when I was a child because I was not very interested in studying. However, now I try to visit the library more frequently to prepare for my exams.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Следует отвечать прямо, использовать правильную лексику и грамматику, а также приводить конкретные причины и примеры.

例: Yes, I believe Chinese children often go to the library, especially since many schools have libraries. This helps them study more effectively and improve their knowledge compared to children in some other countries.

× I'm getting ready to my final exams.

✓ I'm getting ready for my final exams.

The correct preposition to use with 'getting ready' in this context is 'for', not 'to'. 'Ready for' indicates preparation towards something.

× I often go to the library approximately 4 or three times in a week.

✓ I often go to the library approximately 3 or 4 times a week.

The phrase 'in a week' should be 'a week' to indicate frequency. Also, numbers should be consistent and in correct order; '3 or 4 times a week' is clearer.

× Actually the library is a places demonstrators study hard working.

✓ Actually, the library is a place where demonstrators study hard.

'Places' should be singular 'place' because it refers to one library. Also, 'demonstrators study hard working' is incorrect; 'study hard' is the correct phrase.

× So as old people I read books but not from a library.

✓ So, like older people, I read books but not from the library.

'As old people' is incorrect; 'like older people' is the correct expression. Also, 'a library' should be 'the library' if referring to a specific one.

× I just come to zero and sit and read write my own books.

✓ I just come to the library and sit and read or write my own books.

'Come to zero' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'come to the library'. Also, 'read write' should be 'read or write'.

× I rarely go to the library when I was younger and now so, but now I try to go there more because I need to start more right now.

✓ I rarely went to the library when I was younger, but now I try to go there more because I need to study more.

The past action 'rarely go' should be 'rarely went' to match past tense. Also, 'start more' is incorrect; 'study more' fits the context.

× I need to start more right now.

✓ I need to study more right now.

'Start more' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'study' to express the intended meaning.

× Actually I think so, because China's KISS is smarter than European kids to compare, but actually I think their library is located in a school.

✓ Actually, I think so, because Chinese kids are smarter than European kids, to compare, but I think their libraries are located in schools.

'China's KISS' is incorrect; it should be 'Chinese kids'. Also, 'their library is located in a school' should be plural 'libraries are located in schools' to match plural 'kids'.

× So from these qualities they call GO-0 really and from this become more smarter than other European countries children.

✓ Because of these qualities, they really go to the library and because of this, they become smarter than children from other European countries.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'They call GO-0 really' is incorrect; it should be 'they really go to the library'. Also, 'more smarter' is redundant; 'smarter' is correct.