Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and combining ideas smoothly. Try to use linking words to connect your reasons and keep your response within 4-5 sentences.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. Besides, I usually order books online and find all the information I need on the Internet, so I rarely have a reason to visit.

提案: Your answer is relevant and includes a good example, but it would be more natural to use articles correctly and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to avoid minor grammar mistakes.

例: In the library, I usually borrow books or read about topics that aren't available elsewhere. For instance, last year I researched cryptocurrency there because I couldn't find reliable information on Wikipedia or Google.

提案: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use articles properly and maintain consistent verb tenses. Also, try to link your sentences for better flow.

例: Yes, I did. I used to visit the school library at least once a week because I enjoyed its calm and soothing environment. I often borrowed many books and read them when I got home.

提案: Your answer provides good content but could be more concise and natural. Avoid generalizations and improve sentence structure by using linking words and correct prepositions.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. For example, last year I met a Chinese couple who said they encourage their children to start reading books as early as five years old.

× I don't have a library that is in close proximity to my home.

✓ I don't have a library that is in close proximity to my home.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain a 'There be' issue.

× In library I usually go to borrow a book or read a topic that is not available anywhere else.

✓ In the library, I usually go to borrow a book or read a topic that is not available anywhere else.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase improves clarity.

× I like the calm and soothing environment of library.

✓ I like the calm and soothing environment of the library.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' to specify the particular library environment being referred to.

× I used to borrow a lot of books and read them when I get back to the home.

✓ I used to borrow a lot of books and read them when I got back home.

The phrase 'get back to the home' is incorrect; 'got back home' is the correct expression. Also, the past tense 'got' matches the past context of 'used to'.

× they encouraged their children to read books as early as from five years age.

✓ they encouraged their children to read books as early as from the age of five years.

The phrase 'five years age' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'the age of five years' or simply 'age five'. The preposition 'from' is acceptable here but should be followed by the correct noun phrase.