Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'didn't go library' 대신 'haven't been to a library'를 사용하고, 'there are nowhere' 대신 'there is nowhere'로 수정하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: No, I haven't been to a library before because there is no library in my hometown, only a bookstore.

提案: 중복되는 표현과 어색한 문장 구조가 있습니다. 'do reading books' 대신 'read books'를 사용하고, 'having homework' 대신 'do my homework'가 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 문장 연결을 위해 접속사를 활용하세요.

例: I usually read books or do my homework in the library because it is very quiet, so I can concentrate on my work.

提案: 관사 사용과 시제 일치에 주의하세요. 'a elementary school student'는 'an elementary school student'로, 'When I go there'는 'When I went there'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 'books of fiction' 대신 'fiction books'가 자연스럽습니다.

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was an elementary school student because our school had a library. When I went there, I read fiction books.

提案: 'in Chinese'는 'in China'로 수정해야 하며, 문장 구조가 어색합니다. 또한, 'who is the Chinese person' 대신 'who is Chinese'가 자연스럽습니다. 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 명확하게 표현하세요.

例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library. My friend Gina, who is Chinese, told me that he went to the library when he was a kid.

× No, I didn't go library before because in my hometown there are nowhere to go to read books.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library before because in my hometown there is nowhere to go to read books.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'to' after 'go' and incorrectly uses 'are' instead of 'is' for the singular noun 'nowhere'. The correct phrase is 'go to the library' and 'there is nowhere' because 'nowhere' is singular.

× It's only have a bookstore, not a library.

✓ There is only a bookstore, not a library.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's only have' which is ungrammatical. The correct structure to express existence is 'There is' followed by the singular noun 'a bookstore'.

× I usually do reading books or uh, having uh, homework.

✓ I usually read books or do homework.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb or a noun. 'Reading books' and 'having homework' are incorrect here. The correct expressions are 'read books' and 'do homework'.

× Library is so quiet and I can concentrate on my work.

✓ The library is so quiet and I can concentrate on my work.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× When I go there, I read books of fiction.

✓ When I went there, I read books of fiction.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to maintain tense consistency.

× I was a elementary school student because our school had a library.

✓ I was an elementary school student because our school had a library.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'elementary'.

× my friend Gina, who is the Chinese person, said to me he went to the library when he was a kid.

✓ my friend Gina, who is Chinese, told me he went to the library when he was a kid.

The phrase 'the Chinese person' is unnatural; 'Chinese' is used as an adjective without 'the'. Also, 'said to me' is better expressed as 'told me' in this context.