Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "I don't even go" yerine "I rarely go" demek daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde gereksiz tekrarlar var, bunları azaltmalısınız. Örneğin, "There was a time in my life where I used to go library every day" cümlesinde "where" gereksiz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi 5 cümleyi geçmeyecek şekilde ve bağlaçlarla daha akıcı yapmalısınız.

例: I used to go to the library every day when I was preparing for my university exams. However, nowadays I rarely visit it. It really depends on my current situation; if I have an exam coming up, I make sure to study there often.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime kullanımı sorunları var. "search for a special books" yerine "look for special books" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde bağlaçlar kullanarak daha akıcı ve mantıklı bir yapı oluşturmalısınız. Örneğin, "For example" ifadesinden sonra daha net bir bağlaçla devam edebilirsiniz.

例: I usually study for my upcoming exams in the library, but sometimes I look for special books. For example, once I was searching for a rare book that I couldn't find in any bookstore, and I finally found it in a very old library.

提案: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizlikleri ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "I went through rivalry every day" ifadesi anlam açısından uygun değil. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Örneğin, okul gezilerinden sonra kütüphane alışkanlığı kazandığınızı net bir şekilde ifade edin.

例: Yes, I did go to the library as a child, although not very often. We had some school trips to the library, and after one of these trips, I developed a habit of visiting the library regularly.

提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "must be and quiet environment" ifadesi yanlış. Doğru ifade "must have a quiet environment" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı yapmak için gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalı ve bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız.

例: I believe Chinese children often go to the library because their education requires a quiet environment, which libraries provide. However, I'm not entirely sure about this.

× There was a time in my life where I used to go library every day when I was studying for the university exam.

✓ There was a time in my life when I used to go to the library every day when I was studying for the university exam.

The phrase 'where' is incorrectly used; 'when' is appropriate for referring to a time. Also, 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The correct phrase is 'go to the library'. This fixes the 'There be issue' and preposition/article errors.

× There was a time in my life where I used to go library every day when I was studying for the university exam.

✓ There was a time in my life when I used to go to the library every day when I was studying for the university exam.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating a destination. Missing 'to' before 'library' is a preposition error.

× There was a time in my life where I used to go library every day when I was studying for the university exam.

✓ There was a time in my life when I used to go to the library every day when I was studying for the university exam.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here and requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' is an article error.

× It's rarely.

✓ It is rare.

'Rarely' is an adverb and cannot stand alone as a predicate. The correct adjective 'rare' should be used to describe 'it'. This is an incorrect pronoun and word form usage.

× I don't even remember the last time I have been in library.

✓ I don't even remember the last time I have been in the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is an article error.

× I usually study the current exam that I have to pass, but sometimes I do search for a special books.

✓ I usually study for the current exam that I have to pass, but sometimes I do search for special books.

'A special books' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'books' is plural. Also, 'study the exam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'study for the exam'. This involves quantifier and preposition errors.

× I usually study the current exam that I have to pass, but sometimes I do search for a special books.

✓ I usually study for the current exam that I have to pass, but sometimes I do search for special books.

The verb 'study' is usually followed by the preposition 'for' when referring to preparing for an exam. Missing 'for' is a preposition error.

× I usually study the current exam that I have to pass, but sometimes I do search for a special books.

✓ I usually study for the current exam that I have to pass, but sometimes I do search for special books.

Using 'a' before plural noun 'books' is incorrect. 'A' is used with singular countable nouns. This is a quantifier error.

× Then I found it in a very old library.

✓ Then I found it in a very old library.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× I didn't go often, but uh, you know, there were some school trips that they took us to library.

✓ I didn't go often, but uh, you know, there were some school trips where they took us to the library.

The relative pronoun 'that' is less appropriate here; 'where' better indicates the place of the trips. Also, 'to library' needs the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the'. This fixes preposition and relative pronoun usage.

× there were some school trips that they took us to library.

✓ there were some school trips where they took us to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is an article error.

× I don't know what kind of trip was that, but then I started the habits after that trip, I went through rivalry every day.

✓ I don't know what kind of trip that was, but then I started the habit after that trip; I went to the library every day.

The sentence has incorrect word order ('what kind of trip was that' should be 'what kind of trip that was'). 'Started the habits' should be 'started the habit' (singular). 'Went through rivalry' is incorrect; likely intended 'went to the library'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. These are sentence structure and vocabulary errors.

× I started the habits after that trip, I went through rivalry every day.

✓ I started the habit after that trip; I went to the library every day.

'Habits' should be singular 'habit' here. 'Rivalry' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'library'. Also, 'the' is correctly used before 'habit'. This is an article and vocabulary error.

× I went through rivalry every day.

✓ I went to the library every day.

'Rivalry' is a wrong word here; the intended word is 'library'. This is a vocabulary error.

× I do think they do, but I'm not quite sure about that.

✓ I do think they do, but I'm not quite sure about that.

This sentence is correct in modal verb usage and needs no correction.

× I think they do because umm in their education they must be and quiet environment.

✓ I think they do because, in their education, they must be in a quiet environment.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'in' before 'a quiet environment'. Also, commas are needed for clarity. This is a preposition and punctuation error.

× I think they do because umm in their education they must be and quiet environment.

✓ I think they do because, in their education, they must be in a quiet environment.

The phrase 'quiet environment' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting 'a' is an article error.

× So library provides that environment.

✓ So the library provides that environment.

The noun 'library' here refers to a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence is short but correct otherwise.