Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer deer "the" geregtei, "on my during" gesen ugnuudiig zasah heregtei. Tsag hugatsaa zaahdaa "during lunch time or snack time" gesen boloh yum. Tsagaan ug helnii baidal, helnii baiguullaga deer anhaarah heregtei.

例: Yes, I usually go to the library when I have free time during lunch or snack breaks.

提案: Helleg deer "I usually do in library" gesen ug helleg buruu baina. "I usually read books and study in the library" gesen boloh yum. Link hiihdee "because" gesen ug ashiglah heregtei. Tsagaan ug deer "feels I'm relaxed" gesen ugniig "I feel relaxed" gesen bolgoj zasah heregtei.

例: I usually read books and study in the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place where I feel relaxed and can focus well.

提案: Helleg deer davtalt ih baina. "I don't when I was a kid" gesen ug buruu baina. Tsagaan ug deer "I didn't like to read books or study" gesen helbereer helj, helleg deer link hiihdee "because" gesen ug ashiglah heregtei.

例: No, when I was a kid, I liked to play outside in the garden because I didn't like reading books or studying. I just wanted to enjoy my childhood.

提案: Helleg deer "5 kids" gesen ug buruu baina. "Some kids" gesen boloh yum. "Their family are strict" gesen ugniig "their families are strict" gesen bolgoj zasah heregtei. Tsagaan ug deer "I actually don't know if Chinese kids go to the library" gesen helbereer helj, iluu todorhoi bolgoj helne uu.

例: In my opinion, some kids often go to the library because their families are strict and focus on academics. However, I am not sure if Chinese kids usually go to the library.

× Yes, I usually go to library when I have a free time on my during the lunch time or during the snack time.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library when I have free time during lunch time or snack time.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'a free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article. The phrase 'on my during the lunch time' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'during lunch time'.

× I usually do in library, uh, reading books, studying and it's comfortable for me and it's a quiet place, feels I'm relaxed and library helps me to focus and relax all the time.

✓ I usually do things in the library, like reading books and studying. It's comfortable for me, and it's a quiet place. I feel relaxed, and the library helps me to focus and relax all the time.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. The sentence structure was also unclear and needed to be broken into clearer sentences for better understanding.

× No, when I was a kid I liked to enjoy going outside playing in the play garden. I don't when I was a kid. I don't like to read books or study any other stuff. I just want to enjoy my childhood time.

✓ No, when I was a kid I liked to enjoy going outside and playing in the playground. I didn't like to read books or study any other stuff. I just wanted to enjoy my childhood.

The present tense 'don't' is incorrect when referring to past actions; it should be 'didn't'. Also, 'play garden' is better expressed as 'playground'. The verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to match the past time frame.

× In my opinion, 5 kids often go to the library because their family are strict, they create an academic way. Uh, but I actually don't know the Chinese is go to the library.

✓ In my opinion, kids often go to the library because their families are strict and create an academic environment. However, I actually don't know if Chinese children go to the library.

The number '5' is unnecessary and awkward here; 'kids' is plural and sufficient. 'Family' should be plural 'families' to agree with 'kids'. The phrase 'the Chinese is go to the library' is grammatically incorrect and should be rephrased to 'if Chinese children go to the library'.