Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about your favourite book or subject.

例: Yes, I often go to the university library because it has a vast collection of books. My favourite books are about foreign languages, especially Japanese and French, which I enjoy studying.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating words and finish your sentences properly.

例: Usually, I start by searching for books on the university library's website. Then, I find the book I need and spend time reading it there.

提案: Your answer has many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use correct verb forms. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I wasn't interested in books. However, now I really enjoy reading, so I often visit the library.

提案: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains some unclear phrases. Try to be more confident and precise in your opinion. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words. Also, be careful with pronunciation and word choice.

例: I'm Japanese, so I don't know much about Chinese children, but I believe they are very dedicated to studying and often visit libraries to do so.

× There are many so many books in the library.

✓ There are so many books in the library.

The phrase 'many so many' is redundant. The correct expression is 'so many' to indicate a large quantity of books.

× My favorite book is about foreign language so and also there are many following.

✓ My favorite book is about foreign languages, and there are many others as well.

The phrase 'about foreign language so and also there are many following' is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Foreign language' should be plural as 'foreign languages' to match the context, and 'so and also' is incorrect conjunction usage. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper conjunction use.

× There are many books about following language in my university.

✓ There are many books about foreign languages in my university.

The phrase 'following language' is incorrect; it should be 'foreign languages' to correctly refer to multiple languages. This is a singular/plural issue.

× I it is interesting question question, but I always just at first I search books using a website of university library and I find I find it.

✓ It is an interesting question, but I always first search for books using the university library website and find them.

The original sentence has repeated words and awkward structure. 'I it is interesting question question' is incorrect; it should be 'It is an interesting question'. Also, 'search books using a website of university library' is better expressed as 'search for books using the university library website'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I find that book and then read the book and also it is.

✓ I find the book and then read it.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'And also it is' is unclear and unnecessary. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× No, I didn't because, uh, I didn't like books.

✓ No, I didn't because I didn't like books.

The sentence is mostly correct but contains an unnecessary comma after 'because'. Removing the comma improves sentence flow.

× So I'm not, I, I, I was not interested in the library, but now, uh, I really enjoying, I really enjoy reading the book.

✓ So I was not interested in the library, but now I really enjoy reading books.

The phrase 'I really enjoying' is incorrect; it should be 'I really enjoy' to match present tense. Also, 'reading the book' is better as 'reading books' to generalize the activity.

× So I, I come to go to the library.

✓ So I now go to the library.

The phrase 'come to go to the library' is awkward and incorrect. The corrected sentence uses simple present tense to indicate habitual action.

× I'm Japanese so I don't know about Chinese cheat but I think they are very aggressive for studying so I think I guess they often go to the library in order to study.

✓ I'm Japanese, so I don't know much about Chinese children, but I think they are very studious, so I guess they often go to the library to study.

'Chinese cheat' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'Chinese children'. 'Aggressive for studying' is incorrect; 'studious' or 'serious about studying' is better. The sentence is corrected for pronoun use, word choice, and clarity.