Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и избыточные фразы. Старайтесь использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать повторений. Также ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus on studying and reading books.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений. Формулируйте предложения более ясно и грамотно.

例: Usually, I study or read books in the library because I am a university student and plan to become a teacher, so reading is very important for me.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя простые и правильные предложения. Избегайте лишних слов и неясных выражений.

例: I don't remember clearly, but I think I did not go to the library often when I was a kid because my parents were usually busy with work.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Используйте более точные слова и избегайте избыточных фраз. Структурируйте ответ логично с помощью связующих слов.

例: From what I know, Chinese children often visit the library because they are very dedicated to studying and reading, which helps them become very smart.

× I really like go to the library

✓ I really like going to the library

After the verb 'like', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used to indicate an activity that one enjoys.

× I go to there very often

✓ I go there very often

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'there' because 'there' already indicates a place.

× in our life, in our time

✓ in our life, in our time

This phrase is awkward and unclear; it would be better to say 'in our lives' or 'nowadays' but since it is not a direct grammar error from the list, no correction is made.

× it's very important go to the library, go to the study

✓ it's very important to go to the library, to study

After 'important', the infinitive form 'to go' is required, not the bare verb or gerund.

× because in the library is very quiet

✓ because the library is very quiet

The phrase 'in the library is very quiet' is incorrect; the subject 'the library' should come before the verb 'is' without 'in'.

× we can study and reading books in

✓ we can study and read books there

After 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'read' instead of 'reading'. Also, 'in' at the end is awkward; 'there' is better.

× the library is very quiet atmosphere

✓ the library has a very quiet atmosphere

'Atmosphere' is a noun and needs a verb like 'has' to connect it properly; 'quiet' is an adjective describing 'atmosphere'.

× usually at the library I study or reading books

✓ usually at the library I study or read books

After 'or', the base form of the verb should be used to maintain parallel structure.

× it's important for being for reading books

✓ it's important to read books

The phrase 'important for being for reading' is incorrect; 'important to read' is the correct infinitive form.

× I'm I will be teacher in the future

✓ I will be a teacher in the future

The phrase 'I'm I will be' is incorrect; only 'I will be' is needed. Also, 'a' article is required before 'teacher'.

× I haven't remember all the things where I was a kid

✓ I don't remember all the things from when I was a kid

The present perfect negative 'haven't remember' is incorrect; the correct form is 'don't remember'. Also, 'where' should be 'from when' to refer to time.

× my parents are job persons and job people

✓ my parents have jobs

'Job persons' and 'job people' are incorrect; the correct expression is 'have jobs' or 'are working'.

× they are usually it's the work

✓ they usually work

The phrase 'they are usually it's the work' is incorrect; 'they usually work' is the correct expression.

× I haven't got to the library when I was a kid

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid

The present perfect 'haven't got' is incorrect with a past time expression 'when I was a kid'; simple past 'didn't go' is correct.

× Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very, very life studying and reading

✓ Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very studious and like studying and reading

The phrase 'very, very life studying' is incorrect; 'studious' or 'like studying' is the correct expression.