Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but a bit redundant and could be more natural. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas like 'quiet and peaceful' and 'no sound'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 3-4 sentences.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it's a quiet and peaceful place where I can focus on my studies without distractions. It helps me concentrate better and complete my assignments efficiently.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid vague phrases like 'maybe'.

例: Usually, I borrow textbooks or reference books from the library shelves to study. I spend time reading and taking notes to prepare for my exams.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer reasons. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like missing articles.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library more often as a kid because I had more lessons to study. Additionally, I often went there with my classmates to study together.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use plural forms correctly and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to libraries because these places are quiet and peaceful, which helps them concentrate better. As a result, they can improve their memory and study more effectively.

× Yes, I often go to libraries to study my lessons because it's quiet and peaceful and there is no sound and you can do all of your studies.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to study my lessons because it's quiet and peaceful and there is no sound and you can do all of your studies.

The word 'libraries' should be singular 'library' because the sentence refers to the library as a general place where the student studies. Using singular form is more natural here when talking about a habitual action at a specific type of place.

× I take a book that I have to study with myself and I study it in library.

✓ I take a book that I have to study by myself and I study it in the library.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect in this context; 'by myself' correctly expresses doing something alone. Also, 'in library' should be 'in the library' because 'library' is a specific place requiring the definite article.

× Maybe I will take a book from the shelves in the library to study.

✓ Maybe I will take a book from the shelves in the library to study.

This sentence is correct; no article errors found here.

× Yes, I went to library when I was a kid more than now because my lessons were more and I needed to study them, especially with my friends, my classmates.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid more than now because my lessons were more and I needed to study them, especially with my friends, my classmates.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Yes, Chinese kid often go to libraries because the libraries are so quiet and peaceful places, they can focus on their studies and it can help them to memorize everything that they are studying.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to libraries because the libraries are so quiet and peaceful places, they can focus on their studies and it can help them to memorize everything that they are studying.

The noun 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to agree with the plural verb 'go' and the general statement about Chinese children.