Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz daha akıcı ve etkili olabilir. "I used to go" ifadesi geçmiş alışkanlık belirtirken, "especially I went" ifadesi biraz tekrarlı ve yapısal olarak zayıf. Cümlenizi daha kısa ve net yaparak, bağlaçlar kullanarak cevaplarınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

例: I often went to the library in 2020, especially during my final exams at university, because it was very helpful and convenient for my studies.

提案: Cümlenizde zaman uyumsuzluğu ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "I was using library" yerine "I usually use the library" veya "I used the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlenizi geliştirebilirsiniz.

例: I usually use the library for studying because my university subjects are extremely difficult, so I need to study a lot.

提案: Cevabınız açık ve anlaşılır ancak "children library" ifadesi yerine "children's library" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, "It's a amazing thing" ifadesinde "a" yerine "an" kullanılmalı. Bu tür küçük dilbilgisi hatalarına dikkat edin.

例: Unfortunately, no. There was no library in my small hometown, but recently they built a new children's library, which is amazing to see.

提案: Cevabınız oldukça iyi ve detaylı. Ancak "I'm not very sure" ifadesi yerine "I'm not very sure about" gibi daha doğal ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

例: I'm not very sure about the situation in China, but I have noticed that many Chinese children often go to the library to study because they face a lot of academic pressure. Therefore, they spend a lot of time reading and preparing for exams, which helps improve their knowledge and skills.

× I used to go to the library for studying especially I went to the library in 2020 because of my final exams at the university.

✓ I used to go to the library to study, especially in 2020 because of my final exams at the university.

The phrase 'for studying' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'to study' to express purpose. Also, the sentence was a bit awkward and needed restructuring for clarity.

× In general, I was using library for studying.

✓ In general, I used the library for studying.

The phrase 'was using library' is incorrect; 'used the library' is the correct simple past tense form. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× In general, I was using library for studying.

✓ In general, I used the library for studying.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× However, they built a new children library for the kids.

✓ However, they built a new children's library for the kids.

The phrase 'children library' is incorrect; the possessive form 'children's library' is correct.

× It's a amazing thing to see in my small hometown.

✓ It's an amazing thing to see in my small hometown.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'amazing'.