Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I often go to the university library because it has a quiet self-study area where I can concentrate on preparing for exams and completing my assignments.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid unnecessary filler words.

例: Usually, I do my assignments or study for the IELTS exam in the library because it offers a spacious self-study area. Additionally, I often read books there to improve my knowledge.

提案: Your answer has pronunciation issues and some hesitation. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Also, provide a complete sentence with a clear reason and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

例: No, I didn't go to the library often when I was a kid because studying there was not my habit, and I didn't enjoy reading books at that time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer logically, use correct grammar, and avoid mixing ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your thoughts.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but in Japan, many kids often go to the library to borrow books for their assignments.

× In my university library there there is a self studying place and I can I go there to concentrate, concentrate on my preparation for I use or doing my assignments.

✓ In my university library, there is a self-study place where I can go to concentrate on my preparation or doing my assignments.

The sentence had a repeated word 'there' and awkward phrasing. 'Self studying place' should be 'self-study place' as a compound adjective. Also, 'I can I go there' is redundant; it should be 'I can go there'. The phrase 'preparation for I use or doing my assignments' is unclear and corrected to 'preparation or doing my assignments' for clarity.

× Usually I do my assignments or study for IELTS because my as I said my university has a very wide space of self studying films and also I use their to read books.

✓ Usually, I do my assignments or study for IELTS because, as I said, my university has a very wide space for self-study and I also use it to read books.

The phrase 'space of self studying films' is incorrect; it should be 'space for self-study'. 'Use their' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'use it' referring to the space. Added commas for clarity.

× I didn't Cordia because studying at library was not my habit and also uh, I didn't like reading books when I was a kid.

✓ I didn't go to the library because studying at the library was not my habit and also, I didn't like reading books when I was a kid.

'Didn't Cordia' is incorrect; likely intended 'didn't go to the library'. Added 'the' before 'library' as it is a specific place. Removed filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I'm not sure what time in China because I'm from Japan, but in Japan kids, I think a lot of kids are going to library so that they to borrow up books for the assignment.

✓ I'm not sure about the situation in China because I'm from Japan, but in Japan, I think a lot of kids go to the library to borrow books for their assignments.

'Not sure what time in China' is incorrect; corrected to 'not sure about the situation in China'. 'Going to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. 'They to borrow up books' is incorrect; corrected to 'to borrow books'. Added 'their' before 'assignments' for possessive clarity.