Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ không chính xác như "free times" và nên nói ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library with my friends when we have free time.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "I'm usually do" nên là "I usually do" và "when I in the library" nên là "when I am in the library". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually do my homework when I am in the library, and after finishing, I like to read a book.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến mạo từ trong tiếng Anh, ví dụ "read book" nên là "read books" hoặc "read a book". Câu trả lời cũng nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn.

例: No, I didn't. I just read books at home when I was a kid.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không đúng ngữ cảnh như "difficult". Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to study hard and use the library as a resource.

× I often go to the library with my friends when we have free times.

✓ I often go to the library with my friends when we have free time.

The word 'times' is incorrect here because 'free time' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Use 'free time' to refer to periods when one is free.

× I'm usually do my homework when I in the library and then I read a book when I finish my homework.

✓ I usually do my homework when I am in the library and then I read a book when I finish my homework.

The phrase 'I'm usually do' is incorrect because 'am' should not be used with the base verb 'do'. Also, 'when I in the library' is missing the verb 'am'. The correct form is 'I usually do' and 'when I am in the library'.

× No I didn't, I just read book when I was home.

✓ No, I didn't. I just read books when I was home.

The phrase 'read book' is incorrect because 'book' should be pluralized as 'books' to indicate general reading. Also, a comma after 'No' and a period to separate sentences improve clarity.

× Yes, I think so, because Chinese parents always difficult so.

✓ Yes, I think so, because Chinese parents are always strict.

The word 'difficult' is an adjective that does not correctly describe 'parents' in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'strict' or 'demanding'. Also, 'so' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here.