Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "I always go, I go library" and use correct prepositions such as "to the library." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I often go to the library, especially recently because I have been preparing for a health test. I usually study English there every day.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'and' to connect ideas, and correct verb forms such as 'preparing' instead of 'to preparing.' Also, be more specific about the exams you are preparing for.

例: In the library, I usually use my computer to search for information for my essays and concentrate on studying English to prepare for other exams.

提案: Your answer has grammar mistakes and could be more natural. Use past tense consistently ('went' instead of 'go'), and correct verb forms ('to read' instead of 'to reading'). Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to link your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I went to the library just to read books rather than study subjects. It was a much more relaxed experience.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'because' properly, and avoid awkward phrases like 'develop their interests to knowledge.' Instead, say 'develop their interest in learning.'

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to read books and take part in educational activities, which helps develop their interest in learning.

× Especially in recent time, I was preparing for the health test.

✓ Especially recently, I have been preparing for the health test.

The phrase 'in recent time' is incorrect; 'recently' is the proper adverb. Also, since the preparation is ongoing or recent, the present perfect continuous tense 'have been preparing' is more appropriate than simple past 'was preparing'.

× I go library every day to study English.

✓ I go to the library every day to study English.

The noun 'library' requires the preposition 'to' when used with 'go'. Also, 'library' is singular and countable, so it needs the definite article 'the'.

× I always use my computer to search for information for my essay or concentrate on studying English to preparing for else exams.

✓ I always use my computer to search for information for my essay or concentrate on studying English to prepare for other exams.

The verb 'prepare' should be in the base form after 'to' (infinitive), not 'preparing'. Also, 'else exams' is incorrect; 'other exams' is the correct phrase.

× but when I was a kid I just go library to reading books, not uh study some subjects.

✓ but when I was a kid I just went to the library to read books, not study some subjects.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'was'. The phrase 'to reading' should be 'to read' (infinitive). Also, 'go library' needs 'to the library'.

× I just go library to reading books

✓ I just went to the library to read books

The phrase 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. Also, 'reading' should be 'read' after 'to'.

× participate in some educational activities is a good way to develop their interests to knowledge.

✓ participate in some educational activities is a good way to develop their interest in knowledge.

The phrase 'interests to knowledge' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'interest in knowledge'. Also, 'interest' is usually singular in this context.