Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, avoiding redundancy. Use simpler, more natural phrases and keep your response concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually read books or listen to audiobooks on my phone. I find it more convenient to enjoy books at home or on the go.

提案: Your answer has good content but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points with correct grammar.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read books about nature. For example, I enjoy learning about different plants and flowers, which helps me gain more knowledge about the environment.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid filler words and repetition.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my grandparents when I was a child. They were retired teachers and encouraged me to use my free time productively by reading books.

提案: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear expressions. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and speak more confidently. Also, provide clearer and more accurate information with proper sentence structure.

例: From what I know, Chinese children are very serious about their studies. Many of them spend a lot of time studying, often in libraries, to improve their knowledge and skills.

× I like to listen books from my phone instead of going outside.

✓ I like to listen to books on my phone instead of going outside.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'on my phone' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate the device used for listening.

× I like to read book which are little to nature, which help me to know about a nature, different kind of plants, different kind of flowers and it helped me to gain knowledge regarding.

✓ I like to read books which are a little about nature, which help me to learn about nature, different kinds of plants, different kinds of flowers, and they help me to gain knowledge.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the plural verb 'are'. 'Little to nature' is incorrect; it should be 'a little about nature'. 'A nature' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' to match the plural nouns 'plants' and 'flowers'. The verb 'helped' should be present tense 'help' to maintain consistency.

× whenever I have a time I go library

✓ whenever I have time I go to the library

The phrase 'have a time' is incorrect; it should be 'have time' without an article. The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place, so 'go library' should be 'go to the library'.

× there are retired, umm, teacher.

✓ there are retired, umm, teachers.

The noun 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with the plural verb 'are'.

× I, I like to spend my time in library with my grandparents as there are there, there, there are retired, umm, teacher.

✓ I like to spend my time in the library with my grandparents as they are retired teachers.

The pronoun 'there' is incorrectly used instead of 'they' to refer to grandparents. Also, 'in library' should be 'in the library' with the definite article.

× I go library

✓ I go to the library

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place name.

× the Chinese peoples are very serious about their studies

✓ the Chinese people are very serious about their studies

The word 'peoples' is plural referring to different ethnic groups; here, 'people' is the correct plural form referring to the population.

× they spend their 18th hour for study

✓ they spend eighteen hours studying

'18th hour' is incorrect; it should be 'eighteen hours' to indicate duration. Also, 'for study' is better expressed as 'studying'.