Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。比如，可以用连接词来更好地组织理由。

例: I don't often go to the library because I find reading ebooks on my phone or iPad more convenient. Moreover, there isn't a library near my apartment, so going there would take up too much of my time.

提案: 回答中有些重复，且时态使用不够准确。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意时态的一致性。

例: I usually study for important exams in the library because it has a quiet and focused atmosphere. For example, when I was at university, I often went there to prepare for my final exams.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但部分表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议注意时态一致性和词汇搭配。

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I enjoyed reading interesting novels. It was also a good way to save money since I didn't have to buy books. Sometimes, I met my friends there to read comic books, and we always kept quiet.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但表达可以更自然流畅。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because it offers a wide variety of books. Since paper books can be expensive, especially for students from low-income families, they prefer reading at the library to save money.

× Actually I prefer to read ebooks on my phone or on iPad.

✓ Actually, I prefer to read ebooks on my phone or on my iPad.

这里缺少了所有格“my”，应为“my iPad”，表示“我的iPad”。

× If I have to go there, I think it will waste my time.

✓ If I have to go there, I think it will be a waste of my time.

“waste”作为名词时需要加冠词，且表达习惯用“be a waste of”，表示“浪费时间”。

× So I remembered when I was in the university, I went to the library in order to study carefully before the final exam.

✓ So I remember when I was at university, I went to the library in order to study carefully before the final exam.

此处描述的是过去的习惯或记忆，应该用一般现在时“remember”，且“in the university”应改为“at university”，表示在大学期间。

× So I remembered when I was in the university, I went to the library in order to study carefully before the final exam.

✓ So I remember when I was at university, I went to the library in order to study carefully before the final exam.

“in the university”应改为“at university”，表示在大学期间的正确介词用法。

× Sometimes I met my friends to read comics books here and of course we would be very quiet.

✓ Sometimes I met my friends to read comic books here and of course we would be very quiet.

“comics books”应为“comic books”，复合名词中“comic”作形容词使用，不加复数。

× Sometimes I met my friends to read comics books here and of course we would be very quiet.

✓ Sometimes I met my friends to read comic books here and of course we would be very quiet.

“read comic books here”中“here”位置正确，无需改动。

× The libraries can offer a wide variety of books.

✓ Libraries can offer a wide variety of books.

此处泛指图书馆，复数形式不需要冠词“the”。

× However, paper books can be quite expensive, especially for the students from low income families.

✓ However, paper books can be quite expensive, especially for students from low-income families.

“the students”改为“students”，泛指学生；“low income”应加连字符“low-income”，表示复合形容词。