Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'don't often to go'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home in the city. Therefore, I usually study at home instead.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi như 'a books' hay 'is find'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

例: Usually, I read books in the library because I go there mainly to find information for my homework.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa như 'I didn't once I work it'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred watching TV to reading books.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại câu trả lời 'I don't know' nhiều lần và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đúng ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, tránh nhận xét không phù hợp như 'Chinese were very intelligent'. Hãy trả lời một cách khách quan và lịch sự.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many of them go to the library often to study and improve their knowledge.

× No, I don't because my home is far from the library which is in the city, so I don't often to go to the library.

✓ No, I don't because my home is far from the library which is in the city, so I don't often go to the library.

The phrase 'don't often to go' is incorrect because after 'don't' (do not), the base form of the verb should be used without 'to'. The correct form is 'don't often go'. To improve, remember that modal verbs and auxiliary verbs like 'do' are followed by the base verb without 'to'.

× I think it is reading a books because the only reason I go to the library is find information in the book from my homework.

✓ I think it is reading books because the only reason I go to the library is to find information in the books for my homework.

The word 'books' should be plural without the article 'a' because 'a' is used with singular countable nouns. Also, 'find' needs 'to' before it to form the infinitive 'to find'. Additionally, 'in the book' should be 'in the books' to match plural. To improve, use 'a' only with singular nouns and ensure infinitives are formed with 'to'.

× No, I didn't once I work it.

✓ No, I didn't because I worked then.

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'I didn't once I work it' mixes tenses and lacks proper structure. The corrected sentence uses past tense 'worked' to match the past context and adds 'because' for clarity. To improve, ensure past actions are expressed with past tense verbs and sentences are complete.

× I like watching TV instead of reading a book, so I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid.

✓ I liked watching TV instead of reading books, so I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid.

Since the context is past ('when I was a kid'), 'like' should be in past tense 'liked'. Also, 'a book' should be plural 'books' to generalize the activity. To improve, match verb tenses to the time frame and use plural nouns when referring to general activities.

× Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think they often to go to the library because Chinese were very intelligent.

✓ Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think they often go to the library because Chinese are very intelligent.

The phrase 'often to go' is incorrect; after 'often', the base verb without 'to' should be used: 'often go'. Also, 'were' should be 'are' to indicate a general truth. To improve, avoid using 'to' after adverbs like 'often' and use present tense for general facts.