Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler ("uh") çok fazla kullanılmış. Cümleniz tamamlanmamış ve anlamı tam olarak ifade etmiyor. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlenizi tamamlamalı ve dolgu kelimelerden kaçınmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevap 5 cümleyi geçmemeli ve doğrudan soruya yanıt vermelidir.

例: I don't often go to the library nowadays because I prefer studying at home. However, when I was at university, I visited the library frequently since it was large and well-equipped with many resources that helped me with my studies.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve dolgu kelimeler fazla. "Everybody is also study" ifadesi yanlış. Cümleleriniz daha akıcı ve doğru olmalı. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleler arasında geçiş yapabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, daha spesifik detaylar ekleyerek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

例: I usually study for my exams in the library because the atmosphere is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better. Moreover, since everyone else is studying, it motivates me to stay focused. The library rules also require silence, which maintains a peaceful environment.

提案: Cevabınızda zaman uyumsuzluğu ve dilbilgisi hataları var ("don't go" yerine "didn't go" kullanılmalı). Cümleleriniz daha doğru ve doğal olmalı. Ayrıca, cevabınızı destekleyecek daha fazla detay ekleyebilirsiniz.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my schoolwork wasn't very difficult. I usually studied at home, and whenever I had problems, my father was always willing to help me.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime sırası hataları var. Ayrıca, dolgu kelimeler çok fazla. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve doğru kurmalısınız. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamalı ve gerekirse tahminlerinizi mantıklı şekilde ifade etmelisiniz.

例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I don't have any Chinese friends. However, I have a Malaysian friend who, like me, doesn't usually visit the library.

× when I was a student at university, I usually go there because, uh, our university library is very big and, uh, there are lots of things you can.

✓ when I was a student at university, I usually went there because, uh, our university library was very big and, uh, there were lots of things you could.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a student'), so the verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency. 'Go' should be 'went', 'is' should be 'was', and 'are' should be 'were'. Also, 'can' should be 'could' to match the past context.

× the atmosphere indoor is very quiet and everybody is also study with you.

✓ the atmosphere indoors is very quiet and everybody is also studying with you.

'Indoor' should be 'indoors' as an adverb. 'Everybody is also study' is incorrect; the verb should be in the present continuous form 'studying' to agree with 'is'.

× So it's more, uh, good for me to focus on my study.

✓ So it's better for me to focus on my study.

'More good' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'good' is 'better'. Using 'better' is grammatically correct and natural.

× No, I don't go to library when I was a kid because my lessons are not that hard.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my lessons were not that hard.

The sentence refers to past time, so 'don't go' should be 'didn't go'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Are' should be 'were' to match past tense.

× No, I don't go to library when I was a kid because my lessons are not that hard.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my lessons were not that hard.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× if I have some difficulties my father always too willing to help me.

✓ if I had some difficulties, my father was always too willing to help me.

Since the context is past, 'have' should be 'had' and 'always too willing' needs the verb 'was' to be grammatically correct.

× I'm not sure about it because I don't know, uh, have any friend from China,

✓ I'm not sure about it because I don't know, uh, if I have any friends from China,

The phrase 'have any friend' is missing 'if I' to form a correct clause. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the indefinite quantity.

× but I have a friend who is from Malaysia and he's not also, uh, go to library, he's uh, like as me.

✓ but I have a friend who is from Malaysia and he also doesn't go to the library; he's, uh, like me.

'He's not also go' is incorrect; it should be 'he also doesn't go'. 'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Like as me' is incorrect; 'like me' is correct.