Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免重复表达“focus on my learning effectively”。此外，注意冠词使用，如“go to library”应为“go to the library”。建议简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I often go to the library at my school because it's very quiet there, which helps me concentrate better. I also borrow books that are hard to find in stores, which I find very useful for my studies.

提案: 回答中句子较长且结构混乱，建议分句表达，避免语法错误，如“will not disturb by others”应为“am not disturbed by others”。同时，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually study alone in the school's library because it's very quiet, which helps me concentrate. I also watch free online videos about law there, as the peaceful environment allows me to focus without distractions.

提案: 回答较完整，但部分表达不够地道，如“registered a member for me”应为“registered me as a member”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，提升语言流畅度。

例: Yes, when I was a kid, my parents took me to a large community library. My father registered me as a member so I could borrow books regularly, which was a great way to read without having to buy many new books.

提案: 回答中出现口语填充词“UH”，应避免。句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化并使用更准确的词汇，如“occupied with their studies”可改为“busy with their studies”。

例: In my opinion, Chinese kids don't go to libraries very often because they prefer buying their own books. Also, they are usually busy with their studies and don't have much free time to visit the library.

× Yes, I often go to library in my school because I like to study there where it's very quiet so I can focus on my learning effectively without distractions and disturbance.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library in my school because I like to study there where it's very quiet so I can focus on my learning effectively without distractions and disturbance.

在英语中，表示特指的可数名词单数前需要加定冠词“the”，这里的“library”是特指学校的图书馆，所以应加“the”。

× Moreover, I also borrowed books from my school's library and many of the books are cannot be bought on the market now.

✓ Moreover, I also borrow books from my school's library and many of the books cannot be bought on the market now.

句子时态应与上下文保持一致，描述现在的习惯动作应使用一般现在时“borrow”，而不是过去时“borrowed”。另外，“are cannot”结构错误，应去掉“are”。

× For me, I always study on my own in the school's library because it is very quiet, so I can focus on my learning effectively and I also watch some videos teaching laws to me they are free on the Internet and I will not disturb by others and noises in the library.

✓ For me, I always study on my own in the school's library because it is very quiet, so I can focus on my learning effectively. I also watch some videos teaching laws to me; they are free on the Internet and I will not be disturbed by others and noises in the library.

“disturb”是动词，句中应使用被动语态“be disturbed”表示“被打扰”。另外，原句缺少标点，导致句子结构混乱，应适当断句。

× Yes, my parents brought me to a library in my community. It is a very large library and my father registered a member for me so I could borrow the books from there frequently and I thought it was a very good way for me to read books without buying many new ones.

✓ Yes, my parents brought me to a library in my community. It was a very large library and my father registered me as a member so I could borrow books from there frequently. I thought it was a very good way for me to read books without buying many new ones.

描述过去的情况时，时态应保持一致，故“is”应改为“was”。“registered a member for me”表达不正确，应为“registered me as a member”。

× From my perspective, they do not go to libraries UH frequently because they prefer buying their own books instead of sharing with others, and moreover, they are very occupied with their studies, so they do not have too much time to go to the library.

✓ From my perspective, they do not go to libraries frequently because they prefer buying their own books instead of sharing with others, and moreover, they are very occupied with their studies, so they do not have much time to go to the library.

“too much time”通常用于不可数名词，表示“太多时间”，但句意应为“没有很多时间”，故用“much time”更合适。