Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复“IELTS”。

例: Yes, I often visit the library, especially recently because I am preparing for the IELTS test, which I find quite challenging. Therefore, I need to spend a lot of time studying there.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: On a typical day, I usually volunteer at the library to help manage the bookshelves. However, recently I have also been doing my IELTS homework there.

提案: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，“stages of human”不合适。建议用更准确的表达说明母亲的影响，并注意语法。

例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child because my mother always told me that books are the stepping stones to knowledge, so she was very strict about my reading habits during primary school.

提案: 表达不够自然，语法和用词有误。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries. It is common to see kids studying there because Chinese parents usually encourage their children to spend time reading in the library.

× Recently I prepared IELTS test which is difficult for me, so I have to spare much time to study IELTS.

✓ Recently I have been preparing for the IELTS test which is difficult for me, so I have to spare much time to study for IELTS.

这里描述的是最近一段时间的持续动作，应该使用现在完成进行时（have been preparing），而不是一般过去时（prepared）。另外，'prepare IELTS test' 应改为 'prepare for the IELTS test'，因为动词prepare后面需要介词for。

× Recently I prepared IELTS test which is difficult for me, so I have to spare much time to study IELTS.

✓ Recently I have been preparing for the IELTS test which is difficult for me, so I have to spare much time to study for IELTS.

动词prepare后面需要介词for，表示为某事做准备；study后面也需要介词for，表示为某考试学习。

× In a normal day I usually become volunteer in the library to help managing bookshelves, but recently I also do my homework for the IELTS test in the library.

✓ On a normal day I usually become a volunteer in the library to help manage bookshelves, but recently I also do my homework for the IELTS test in the library.

表达“在正常的一天”应使用介词on而不是in；'become volunteer'前应加不定冠词a；'help managing'应改为'help manage'，help后面接动词原形。

× Of course my mom always tells me the books are the stages of human, so she was so stricted on me when I was a kid in my primary school.

✓ Of course my mom always tells me that books are the stages of humans, so she was very strict with me when I was a kid in primary school.

'stirected'是错误的词形，正确形容词是'strict'；'strict on me'应改为'strict with me'；'the books'改为'books'更自然；'stages of human'应改为'stages of humans'。

× Of course my mom always tells me the books are the stages of human, so she was so stricted on me when I was a kid in my primary school.

✓ Of course my mom always tells me that books are the stages of humans, so she was very strict with me when I was a kid in primary school.

'strict'后面搭配介词应为'with'，表示对某人严格。

× Of course, in Chinese we can often see the kids in library everywhere. Chinese parents always encourage their children to study in library.

✓ Of course, in China we can often see kids in libraries everywhere. Chinese parents always encourage their children to study in the library.

'in Chinese'应为'in China'表示地点；'kids in library everywhere'应改为'kids in libraries everywhere'，复数形式更合适；'study in library'前应加定冠词'the'。