Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chắc chắn như "like" hay "uhm". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library frequently when I was at university, about 12 years ago. However, after graduating, I rarely visit because I can easily find information online.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "learn much more effective". Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

例: When I was at university, I usually went to the library to find books for my essays and projects. Moreover, I enjoyed the quiet atmosphere there because it helped me study more effectively.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều/số ít (libraries thay vì library) và sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: When I was a kid, there were not many libraries in my city. In fact, Hanoi had only one library, so I rarely went there. Instead, I often visited a small bookshop near my house.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh nói quá nhiều về bản thân không liên quan. Sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but in Vietnam, children don't often go to libraries because there are many bookshops nearby. For example, I have five bookshops near my house, so visiting libraries is less common.

× Unfortunately, when I was a kid, there was not many library in the city.

✓ Unfortunately, when I was a kid, there were not many libraries in the city.

The subject 'libraries' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was', and 'library' should be pluralized to 'libraries' to match the plural form. This is a singular and plural issue.

× In Hanoi there was only one, I think one library for the whole city.

✓ In Hanoi, there was only one library for the whole city.

The sentence is correct in singular form here, but the comma splice should be fixed by removing the repeated phrase. This is more a sentence structure issue, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar problem types listed, no change is needed here.

× There are five book shops near my house.

✓ There are five bookshops near my house.

'Bookshops' is one word, but this is a minor spelling issue, not listed in the grammar problem types, so no correction needed. The plural form is correct.

× So going to the library.

✓ So, going to the library is less common.

The sentence fragment 'So going to the library.' lacks a verb and is incomplete. It should be completed to form a full sentence. This is a sentence structure error.

× I used to go to the library quite often when I was in the university.

✓ I used to go to the library quite often when I was at university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at university' is the correct phrase to indicate attendance at an institution. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× After graduating, I didn't go to the library as much because umm, I can search for the books or information.

✓ After graduating, I didn't go to the library as much because I could search for books or information.

The sentence refers to past time ('After graduating'), so the modal verb 'can' should be in past form 'could' to maintain tense consistency. This is a present tense issue.

× I love the atmospheres in the library and I felt that I could learn much more effective in the library.

✓ I love the atmosphere in the library and I felt that I could learn much more effectively in the library.

'Atmosphere' is uncountable and should be singular. Also, 'effective' is an adjective but should be the adverb 'effectively' to modify the verb 'learn'. The first is a singular and plural issue; the second is incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.

× I love the atmospheres in the library and I felt that I could learn much more effective in the library.

✓ I love the atmosphere in the library and I felt that I could learn much more effectively in the library.

The word 'effective' is an adjective but should be the adverb 'effectively' to correctly modify the verb 'learn'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.