Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için, zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı 3-4 cümle ile sınırlayın ve bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıklı bir akış oluşturun.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library twice a week when I was a student because my exams were very difficult. I preferred studying there since I couldn't concentrate at home.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar mevcut. Daha doğal ve etkili cevaplar için, cümlelerinizi düzgün yapıda kurun ve bağlaçlarla destekleyin. Ayrıca, detay verirken daha spesifik olmaya çalışın.

例: I usually use the computer at the library because I don't have one at home. Besides that, I often look for new books to read and expand my knowledge.

提案: Cümlenizde zaman ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. Daha doğru ve doğal cevaplar için, geçmiş zaman kullanımı ve doğru kelimeleri tercih edin. Ayrıca, cevabınızı bağlaçlarla zenginleştirin.

例: Yes, I went to the library once when I was a kid during a school trip. My teacher took us there to introduce us to the resources available.

提案: Cevabınızda belirsizlik ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Bilmediğiniz konularda tahmin yürütürken daha dikkatli olun ve cümlenizi net ve doğru yapıda kurun. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi ifade edin.

例: I am not sure about the habits of Chinese kids regarding libraries. However, I believe many of them visit libraries regularly to study and read books.

× I was the go uh, library at twice a week.

✓ I used to go to the library twice a week.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the go uh, library' which is ungrammatical and confuses singular/plural usage. The correct phrase is 'go to the library' and 'twice a week' indicates frequency. The verb 'used to go' correctly expresses habitual past action.

× because my exams is so hard

✓ because my exams are so hard

The subject 'exams' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I never study in home.

✓ I never study at home.

The correct preposition to use with 'home' in this context is 'at', not 'in'.

× I only study in library.

✓ I only study in the library.

The noun 'library' is countable and singular here, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I was.

✓ I did.

The sentence fragment 'I was.' is incomplete and incorrect here. The student likely intended to say 'I did' to confirm the previous statement.

× Uh, using the computer because I'm not have a computer at my home,

✓ I use the computer because I don't have a computer at my home,

The verb 'using' is incorrectly used without a subject. Also, 'I'm not have' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have'.

× I'm not have a computer at my home,

✓ I don't have a computer at my home,

The present tense negative form of 'have' is 'do not have' or 'don't have', not 'I'm not have'.

× so when I go to library, uh, I'm using that and uh, I'm looking for new books for reading.

✓ so when I go to the library, I use it and look for new books to read.

The present simple tense is more appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'using that' is vague; 'use it' is clearer. 'For reading' should be 'to read'.

× Yes, I want once, uh, it's school trip

✓ Yes, I went once on a school trip,

The verb 'want' is incorrect; it should be 'went' (past tense). Also, 'it's school trip' should be 'a school trip'.

× Yes, I want once, uh, it's school trip and my teacher, uh, took me there just for one time.

✓ Yes, I went once on a school trip and my teacher took me there just one time.

The verb 'want' is incorrect; it should be 'went' to indicate past action. 'Just for one time' is better as 'just one time'.

× I don't have any information about the Chinese kid and their library

✓ I don't have any information about Chinese kids and their libraries

'Kid' should be plural 'kids' to match 'their'. Also, 'library' should be plural 'libraries' to match 'kids'.

× but I think they will go for a week.

✓ but I think they go once a week.

The question is about frequency, so present simple 'go once a week' is more appropriate than future tense 'will go for a week'.