Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần tránh các câu ngắn rời rạc và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, câu "Because I am an English grammar teacher" nên được nối với câu trước để tránh cảm giác bị ngắt quãng. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn như "prepare lessons" thay vì "repair lessons".

例: Yes, I do. I actually go to my school library almost every day because I am an English grammar teacher. I often spend time choosing PM books that are suitable for my primary students, and it's also a peaceful place for me to prepare lessons and get inspired by new teaching materials.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Câu "great readers that make my students learning levels" không rõ nghĩa và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên dùng "great readers that match my students' learning levels". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: I mainly look for great readers that match my students' learning levels. Sometimes, I read a few pages myself to ensure the stories are interesting and appropriate for their age. Occasionally, I also borrow teaching guides to improve my classroom activities.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi nhỏ như "last round" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên dùng "in the past" hoặc "when I was younger".

例: Yes, I did. I absolutely loved books. When I was little, I used to visit the local library every weekend and borrow as many story books as I could. Reading was my favorite hobby, and I think that's one of the reasons why I became an English teacher.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một vài liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng ý hơn một chút để tăng tính thuyết phục.

例: Not as often as they used to, unfortunately. Nowadays, many children prefer reading online or watching videos instead of going to a physical library. However, some schools are trying to encourage reading habits again by creating colorful and comfortable libraries with storytelling corners to attract students.

× Because I am an English grammar teacher.

✓ I am an English grammar teacher.

The sentence 'Because I am an English grammar teacher.' is a fragment because it starts with a subordinating conjunction 'Because' but lacks a main clause. To correct this, remove 'Because' to make it a complete sentence.

× I often spend some time choosing PM books that are suitable for my primary students.

✓ I often spend some time choosing PM books that are suitable for my primary students.

This sentence is grammatically correct; 'spend some time choosing' correctly uses the verb + -ing form after 'spend time'.

× It's also a peaceful place for me to repair lessons and yet inspired by new teaching materials.

✓ It's also a peaceful place for me to prepare lessons and to get inspired by new teaching materials.

The original sentence has a wrong verb 'repair' instead of 'prepare' and an incomplete structure 'and yet inspired by new teaching materials' which lacks a subject and verb. The correction uses parallel infinitive phrases to clarify meaning.

× I mainly look for great readers that make my students learning levels.

✓ I mainly look for great readers that match my students' learning levels.

The phrase 'make my students learning levels' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'match' to indicate suitability, and 'students' learning levels' requires a possessive apostrophe.

× Sometimes I read a few pages myself to make sure the stories are interesting and appropriate for their age.

✓ Sometimes I read a few pages myself to make sure the stories are interesting and appropriate for their age.

This sentence is correct; the pronouns are used appropriately.

× Occasionally I also borrow some teaching guides to improve my classroom activities.

✓ Occasionally I also borrow some teaching guides to improve my classroom activities.

This sentence is correct; 'some' is appropriately used with countable plural noun 'teaching guides'.

× When I was little, I used to visit the local library every weekend and borrow as many books, story books as I could.

✓ When I was little, I used to visit the local library every weekend and borrow as many books and story books as I could.

The original sentence misses the conjunction 'and' between 'books' and 'story books', which is necessary to correctly list items.

× Reading was my favorite hobby and I think that's one of the reasons why I became an English teacher last round.

✓ Reading was my favorite hobby, and I think that's one of the reasons why I became an English teacher last year.

The phrase 'last round' is incorrect in this context; 'last year' is the appropriate time expression. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate independent clauses.

× Not as often as they used to, unfortunately.

✓ Not as often as they used to, unfortunately.

This sentence is a fragment but acceptable as a short answer. No grammatical error related to the problem list.

× Nowadays, many children prefer reading online or watching videos instead of going to a physical library.

✓ Nowadays, many children prefer reading online or watching videos instead of going to a physical library.

This sentence is correct; prepositions are used appropriately.

× However, some schools are trying to encourage reading habits again by creating colorful, comfortable libraries with storytelling corners.

✓ However, some schools are trying to encourage reading habits again by creating colorful, comfortable libraries with storytelling corners.

This sentence is correct; conjunctions are used appropriately.