Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "besides that" twice and improve sentence structure. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I used to go to the library often, but now I don't have time and there isn't a library nearby. However, I really enjoy studying there because of the quiet and focused atmosphere.

提案: Try to avoid repeating phrases like "besides that" and use linking words such as "also" or "in addition". Make your sentences more concise and clear, and provide specific examples to support your points.

例: In the library, I usually study and enjoy reading new books. I also spend time planning for the next day. Additionally, seeing others study motivates me to keep working hard.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words like "however" to connect contrasting ideas and avoid filler words like "umm."

例: When I was a kid, there was no library in my village, so I didn't go. However, when I became a university student, I visited the library every day.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to organize your ideas logically, avoid filler words, and provide a clear opinion with supporting details.

例: I haven't often seen Chinese kids in libraries, but I believe they study in many places. For them, a library can be anywhere, such as at home, in pharmacies, supermarkets, or even where their parents work.

× ...nearby there is no any library so I can't go.

✓ ...nearby there is no library so I can't go.

The phrase 'no any' is incorrect because 'no' and 'any' cannot be used together in this context. Use either 'no' or 'any' but not both. Here, 'no library' is correct to express the absence of libraries nearby.

× I like studying in the library and really enjoying reading new books.

✓ I like studying in the library and really enjoy reading new books.

After 'I like', the verb should be in the base form or gerund consistently. Using 'like' with 'enjoying' is incorrect here; it should be 'enjoy' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.

× ...sometimes I'm just sitting and thinking about the next day's plan.

✓ ...sometimes I'm just sitting and thinking about the next day's plans.

The phrase 'the next day's plan' is grammatically correct but 'plans' is more natural when referring to multiple activities or intentions for the next day. This is a minor quantifier issue but improves naturalness.

× When I was a kid, there was not library in my village available, so I didn't go there.

✓ When I was a kid, there was no library available in my village, so I didn't go there.

The phrase 'there was not library' is incorrect because 'library' is singular and needs an article or quantifier. 'There was no library' is the correct form to indicate absence of a singular noun.

× But when I got a student, umm there was a library in my university and I was I used to visit it every day.

✓ But when I became a student, there was a library in my university and I used to visit it every day.

The phrase 'I got a student' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I became a student'. Also, 'I was I used to' is redundant and incorrect; 'I used to' alone suffices.

× I didn't see Chinese kids in the library, but I can see that they can study anywhere.

✓ I don't see Chinese kids in the library, but I can see that they can study anywhere.

The tense should be consistent with the question about general habits. 'I didn't see' implies past, but the question is about general behavior, so 'I don't see' is more appropriate.

× For them, library is anywhere and chemistry, uh, and a pharmacy and the supermarkets anywhere their parents work and their parents were stations, I mean.

✓ For them, the library is anywhere: in chemistry, pharmacy, supermarkets, anywhere their parents work or at their parents' workplaces, I mean.

The sentence has multiple preposition and article errors. 'Library' needs 'the' to specify it. Also, 'their parents were stations' is incorrect; it should be 'their parents' workplaces' or similar. Prepositions like 'in' and 'at' are needed to specify locations properly.