Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler sounds like 'UH' and be more natural by saying 'I usually don't go to the library. Nowadays, I prefer reading on my Kindle.' Also, add a reason to make your answer more effective and complete.

例: I usually don't go to the library because I find it more convenient to read on my Kindle nowadays.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. Use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas. Also, correct grammar by saying 'I preferred' instead of 'I prefer' for past habits. For example, 'I don't usually go to the library now; however, when I was in college, I used to visit it frequently and preferred reading academic books.'

例: I don't usually go to the library now; however, when I was in college, I used to visit it frequently and preferred reading academic books to help with my studies.

提案: Make your answer more natural by adding articles and linking words. For example, say 'Yes, when I was a kid, there was a small library in my school. Usually, after lunch break, I used to go there and spend half an hour reading academic books.' This improves clarity and flow.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, there was a small library in my school. Usually, after lunch break, I used to go there and spend half an hour reading academic books.

提案: Avoid awkward phrases like 'I don't have much visibility.' Instead, say 'I don't know much about Chinese kids.' Also, improve grammar and coherence: 'China is doing very well in engineering, so I believe many people there go to the library.'

例: I don't know much about Chinese kids, but since China is doing very well in engineering, I believe many people there often go to the library to study.

× No, usually I don't go to library UH.

✓ No, usually I don't go to the library UH.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before singular, countable, specific nouns is incorrect.

× As I said, I usually don't go to library now, but when I was in college I used to visit library frequently and I prefer to read academic books.

✓ As I said, I usually don't go to the library now, but when I was in college I used to visit the library frequently and I prefer to read academic books.

The noun 'library' is specific and countable, so it needs the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' in such cases is a common error.

× Yes, when I was kid there was a small library in my school and usually after lunch break I used to go there and spend half an hour reading academic books.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid there was a small library in my school and usually after lunch break I used to go there and spend half an hour reading academic books.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'kid' because 'kid' is a singular countable noun. It should be 'a kid'.

× I don't have much visibility on Chinese kids, but as I know that China is very doing very well in engineering, so I believe that a lot of people are going to library there.

✓ I don't have much visibility on Chinese kids, but as I know that China is doing very well in engineering, so I believe that a lot of people are going to the library there.

The phrase 'going to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'is very doing very well' is incorrect and corrected to 'is doing very well'.

× I don't have much visibility on Chinese kids, but as I know that China is very doing very well in engineering, so I believe that a lot of people are going to library there.

✓ I don't have much visibility on Chinese kids, but as I know that China is doing very well in engineering, so I believe that a lot of people are going to the library there.

The phrase 'is very doing very well' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'is doing very well' because 'doing' is the present participle used with 'is' to form the present continuous tense. The extra 'very' is unnecessary and incorrect.