Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I enjoy to read,' you could say 'I enjoy reading novels, and recently I completed one called Period Kamil by Umara Ahmed, which I found very engaging.'

例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends because I enjoy reading novels. Recently, I finished a book called Period Kamil by Umara Ahmed, which I found very engaging and enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Make sure to complete your sentences and avoid repeating information from previous answers. Use linking words to add more details logically. For example, you could say, 'I usually read novels in the library. Recently, I finished a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed, which I enjoyed because it was full of love and peaceful themes.'

例: In the library, I usually read novels. For instance, I recently completed a book called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed, which I enjoyed because it explores themes of love and tranquility.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use proper verb tenses. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'interesting poems' without elaboration. For example, you could say, 'Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my father on weekends. I enjoyed reading poems that were filled with themes of love and emotion.'

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often visited the library with my father on weekends. I enjoyed reading poems that were full of love and deep feelings.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Also, avoid starting with 'I don't know too much' as it weakens your response. Instead, try to give a general opinion or comparison. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you could say, 'Although I am not sure about Chinese kids, in my hometown, children often visit the library on weekends to read poems, which they find fascinating and full of emotion.'

例: While I am not very familiar with Chinese children’s habits, in my hometown, kids usually go to the library on weekends to read poems because they find them fascinating and full of emotion.

× Yes, usually I often go to library on weekends because I am a book reader so I enjoy to read interesting novels and recently I just completed a novel name period Kamil by Umara Ahmed.

✓ Yes, usually I often go to the library on weekends because I am a book reader so I enjoy reading interesting novels and recently I just completed a novel named Period Kamil by Umara Ahmed.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'enjoy to read' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('reading'). Additionally, 'name period Kamil' should be corrected to 'named Period Kamil' to properly describe the novel's title.

× Yes, usually I often go to library on weekends because I am a book reader so I enjoy to read interesting novels and recently I just completed a novel name period Kamil by Umara Ahmed.

✓ Yes, usually I often go to the library on weekends because I am a book reader so I enjoy reading interesting novels and recently I just completed a novel named Period Kamil by Umara Ahmed.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form of the verb, so 'enjoy to read' is incorrect and should be 'enjoy reading'.

× Well I usually read interesting novels in library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy to read this novels because it full of love and engaging peacefulness and I also.

✓ Well, I usually read interesting novels in the library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy reading this novel because it is full of love and engaging peacefulness.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. 'Enjoy to read' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy reading'. Also, 'this novels' is incorrect because 'novels' is plural but 'this' is singular; it should be 'this novel'. Additionally, 'it full of' should be 'it is full of' to include the verb 'is'.

× Well I usually read interesting novels in library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy to read this novels because it full of love and engaging peacefulness and I also.

✓ Well, I usually read interesting novels in the library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy reading this novel because it is full of love and engaging peacefulness.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form, so 'enjoy to read' is incorrect and should be 'enjoy reading'.

× Well I usually read interesting novels in library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy to read this novels because it full of love and engaging peacefulness and I also.

✓ Well, I usually read interesting novels in the library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy reading this novel because it is full of love and engaging peacefulness.

'This novels' is incorrect because 'this' is singular and 'novels' is plural. The correct form is 'this novel'.

× Well I usually read interesting novels in library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy to read this novels because it full of love and engaging peacefulness and I also.

✓ Well, I usually read interesting novels in the library and recently I just completed a novel called Piragamil by Umara Ahmed and I really enjoy reading this novel because it is full of love and engaging peacefulness.

The phrase 'it full of love' is missing the verb 'is'. The correct form is 'it is full of love'.

× Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to library with my father on weekends and when I go I read interesting poems and I really enjoy to read these poems because it is filled with love and.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to the library with my father on weekends and when I went I read interesting poems and I really enjoyed reading these poems because they are filled with love.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past context. Also, 'enjoy' should be past tense 'enjoyed' to maintain consistency. 'Enjoy to read' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoyed reading'. 'It is filled' should be 'they are filled' because 'poems' is plural.

× Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to library with my father on weekends and when I go I read interesting poems and I really enjoy to read these poems because it is filled with love and.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to the library with my father on weekends and when I went I read interesting poems and I really enjoyed reading these poems because they are filled with love.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'it is filled' should be 'they are filled' because 'poems' is plural.

× Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to library with my father on weekends and when I go I read interesting poems and I really enjoy to read these poems because it is filled with love and.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to the library with my father on weekends and when I went I read interesting poems and I really enjoyed reading these poems because they are filled with love.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form, so 'enjoy to read' is incorrect and should be 'enjoyed reading'.

× Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to library with my father on weekends and when I go I read interesting poems and I really enjoy to read these poems because it is filled with love and.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a kid I went to the library with my father on weekends and when I went I read interesting poems and I really enjoyed reading these poems because they are filled with love.

'It is filled' is incorrect because 'poems' is plural; the correct form is 'they are filled'.

× I don't know too much about Chinese kids, but in my hometown our kids are usually go to library on weekends to read interesting poems because they are full of love and. Fascinating.

✓ I don't know too much about Chinese kids, but in my hometown our kids usually go to the library on weekends to read interesting poems because they are full of love and fascinating.

'Kids are usually go' is incorrect; it should be 'kids usually go' to maintain subject-verb agreement. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The fragment 'and. Fascinating.' should be combined into 'and fascinating' to complete the sentence properly.

× I don't know too much about Chinese kids, but in my hometown our kids are usually go to library on weekends to read interesting poems because they are full of love and. Fascinating.

✓ I don't know too much about Chinese kids, but in my hometown our kids usually go to the library on weekends to read interesting poems because they are full of love and fascinating.

The phrase 'kids are usually go' is incorrect because 'are' and 'go' cannot be used together here. The correct form is 'kids usually go' to agree with the plural subject.