Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Well, that's a great question, but actually not a great question to me 'cause I really, really hate libraries, 'cause I do hate studying and reading books. So I've actually never ever been to a library before.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
So like I said, I've never ever been to a library before, but if I were in a library I would just be quiet, read some books. Well, I do not like books, but I would just try to read them and maybe I would write some things.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
No, maybe if there was a one in my hometown I would have been there. But there is no libraries in my city. I'm sorry, in my hometown I meant so I've never ever been to a library before. But even if there was, probably I wouldn't go 'cause I don't like it.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
That's a hard question to ask 'cause I do not really know what Chinese people or the libraries, but in my opinion Chinese people are very smart and I think they like reading and studying. So in my opinion they do go to library very.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 50.0提案: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve etkili bir dil kullanmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve olumsuz ifadeler yerine, doğrudan soruya yanıt verip nedenlerinizi açıkça belirtin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi 5 cümleyi geçmeden tutmaya çalışın.
例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home. I find libraries a bit quiet and not very inspiring for me. However, I sometimes visit to borrow books when I need them.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 55.0提案: Cevabınızda daha net ve doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Koşullu cümleler yerine doğrudan cevap verip, nedenlerinizi ve detayları açıkça belirtin. Ayrıca, cümleler arasında bağlaç kullanarak akıcılığı artırabilirsiniz.
例: I usually read books quietly in the library because it is a peaceful place. Sometimes, I also write notes or study for exams there to focus better.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 60.0提案: Cevabınızı daha açık ve doğrudan yapmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları ve karışıklığı önleyin. Ayrıca, neden gitmediğinizi ve durumunuzu daha spesifik detaylarla açıklayın.
例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there was no library in my hometown. Even if there had been one, I probably wouldn't have gone because I preferred other activities.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 50.0提案: Cevabınızda kesin ifadeler kullanmaya çalışın ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyin. Ayrıca, görüşlerinizi desteklemek için daha spesifik nedenler veya örnekler verin. Cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirin.
例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is very important in China. They usually enjoy reading and studying there to improve their knowledge.
文法
× But there is no libraries in my city.
✓ But there are no libraries in my city.
The subject 'libraries' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.
× So in my opinion they do go to library very.
✓ So in my opinion they do go to the library very often.
The noun 'library' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' and the adverb 'very' needs a complement like 'often' to complete the meaning. Also, 'library' is singular and needs an article here.
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